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Comment from Sally Law
Is this really you? This is so sweet! I was not expecting this AT ALL! This was a pleasant surprise with my afternoon cup of joe and reviewing time. Best wishes for the contest.
Kindest regards,
Sally
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Is this really you? This is so sweet! I was not expecting this AT ALL! This was a pleasant surprise with my afternoon cup of joe and reviewing time. Best wishes for the contest.
Kindest regards,
Sally
Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Sally. Maybe I?ll throw wild bear into my story.
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Sounds good to me!
Comment from fm wright
A truly delightful read. A cute little story. I like the way the picture fits in so well with your words. This is an excellent entry for the minute contest. It flows very smoothly. I wish you well with this piece.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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A truly delightful read. A cute little story. I like the way the picture fits in so well with your words. This is an excellent entry for the minute contest. It flows very smoothly. I wish you well with this piece.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks, FM
Comment from Kelly Grim
Lovely, lighthearted entry appropriately titled, Bear World! I love the Minute, and you execute it really well here. I hear iambic meter in the lines of 4 syllables for sure... the 8 syllable lines stray a bit, again to my ear which may be off, but they're allowed according to the contest rules! Great bear related imagery.. really good old down home feel from this! Well done!!!!!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Lovely, lighthearted entry appropriately titled, Bear World! I love the Minute, and you execute it really well here. I hear iambic meter in the lines of 4 syllables for sure... the 8 syllable lines stray a bit, again to my ear which may be off, but they're allowed according to the contest rules! Great bear related imagery.. really good old down home feel from this! Well done!!!!!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Kelly
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute and well written minute poem you have penned for the contest about Bear world. You used very cute descriptive words and very adorable imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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Bill, This is a very cute and well written minute poem you have penned for the contest about Bear world. You used very cute descriptive words and very adorable imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from damommy
A good Minute poem with a cute theme. I'm sure the bear works hard to earn his honey, and doesn't he look cute in his overalls? However, his smile indicates he's not looking forward to working. lol
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A good Minute poem with a cute theme. I'm sure the bear works hard to earn his honey, and doesn't he look cute in his overalls? However, his smile indicates he's not looking forward to working. lol
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2018
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Thanks, da