Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Bill, somehow this cracked me up. So often when I review I need the whimsy of a well written poem. Love the line, ...bare bear facts. Reminds me of the Lion King where two characters sing the Bare Necessities. Thanks for making me smile today. Hugh

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018

Thanks, Hugh

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This fills the requirements for a tanka except that not a real bear is a bit of a sartorial let dow. You will have definitely heart the little fellows feelings there. But hang on it isn't meant to be a tanka, just a silly pranka. Great fun.

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018

Prankas enjoy freedom from preconceived notions of conformity.

reply by Pantygynt on 02-Oct-2018

Well of course they do.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This one is hilarious! When I got the notification there was a Bear World 5 I wondered , "What could be the subject?" I think this is one of your best yet. Great Job!

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2018

Thanks, Earl. The subject, of course, is bear?s inhubearity to bear.