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Comment from nomi338
When my belly says "Go get it!" I must obey. Berries, honey, picnic baskets, I want them all. Please do not lock them away from me as I will have to work harder and become even hungrier, more angry and even more mean tempered. Better look out!
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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When my belly says "Go get it!" I must obey. Berries, honey, picnic baskets, I want them all. Please do not lock them away from me as I will have to work harder and become even hungrier, more angry and even more mean tempered. Better look out!
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Is this the bear speaking or you? I?ll be sure to not get between you and those items.
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You my friend, are smarter than you appear.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like the way you personified the berries and the bear. Good job, Bill, with your poem. The art is a good pairing, too. I like that you don't label this as a 575 even though that is the syllable count. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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I like the way you personified the berries and the bear. Good job, Bill, with your poem. The art is a good pairing, too. I like that you don't label this as a 575 even though that is the syllable count. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Thanks, Jan, for the nice review. Bill