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My life after meeting Jim.
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Scarbrems
I enjoyed this. You've written in an easy, chatty way that makes me feel like I'm in your living room, listening to you tell the story. It's interesting reading for those not from the US.
One thing -
I know, everyone is saying 'what' - need a ? after 'What'.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your kind comments, I will make that correction in a moment. May I ask where you are from?
reply by Scarbrems on 24-Sep-2018
Sark. A tiny island in the middle of the English Channel.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
Oh my goodness, an island! What fun, that in itself is an adventure. I forgot to mention that I was trying to do this story as if it were a blog- scattered but constructive lol.
reply by Scarbrems on 24-Sep-2018
If you put 'Sark, Channel Islands' into google, you can see it.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
I just did, it is amazing, it would be great to live there, my kind of place.
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