Welcome, Dear Autumn!
5/7/5 Ode to Autumn: A Time to Harvest and Gather Round...22 total reviews
Comment from CadenAaron
I really felt the excitement and joy of fall in this pierce. You captured the emotion of the season very well in such few words! Very good job, and best of luck in the competition and with your writing in the future (:
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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I really felt the excitement and joy of fall in this pierce. You captured the emotion of the season very well in such few words! Very good job, and best of luck in the competition and with your writing in the future (:
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Friend!
So very pleased you enjoyed!
Autumn is one of my favorite seasons along with Spring, Summer and Winter! :)
Thank you again!
Comment from Aries Poet
A lovely poem about Autumn. I was able to bring up memories of feeling the crisp Autumn air, while out in the yard doing fall cleanup and I have memories of sitting by the fireside with my cats by my side,, enjoying the warmth as the nights became colder and colder.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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A lovely poem about Autumn. I was able to bring up memories of feeling the crisp Autumn air, while out in the yard doing fall cleanup and I have memories of sitting by the fireside with my cats by my side,, enjoying the warmth as the nights became colder and colder.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Friend!
I am so pleased my poem resonated with you!
Thank you for your lovely review!
So appreciated!
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a lovely ode to Autumn poem, my friend. I love the: "crisp harvest days" and "hearthside blaze..." A nice little rhyme worked into this 5-7-5. Good luck!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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This is a lovely ode to Autumn poem, my friend. I love the: "crisp harvest days" and "hearthside blaze..." A nice little rhyme worked into this 5-7-5. Good luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Kerry!
I smiled when I read your review!
I attempted to "work into" this little offering everything I love about Autumn and rhyme as well! Whew! A tad bit challenging!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your lovely review!
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My pleasure, my friend:))
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a stunning photo. I'd like to sit near that fireplace, "ablaze." I like the rhyming pattern. You have a well-written and nicely formatted 5-7-5. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. This is a great entry!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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What a stunning photo. I'd like to sit near that fireplace, "ablaze." I like the rhyming pattern. You have a well-written and nicely formatted 5-7-5. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. This is a great entry!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Cindy!
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the Feelings contest! An excellent poetic offering!
As for my ode, I attempted to include everything I love about Autumn...and a pinch of rhyme! A tad bit challenging!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
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Thank you so much for your Congrats on my 2nd place. I wish you luck in that contest. :)
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a gem in its tribute to Autumn and the most colorful of our seasons - fully compliant with the prompt and seamless in its delivery and complementary imagery. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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In my opinion, a gem in its tribute to Autumn and the most colorful of our seasons - fully compliant with the prompt and seamless in its delivery and complementary imagery. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hello Eve,
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review! My favorite time of the year - beside Spring, Summer, and Winter! :)
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I certainly did, you're welcome, and thank you for sharing - glad to see it's one of your favorite seasons, as are all - I agree...Eve
Comment from Shanbreen
This is a poem that makes you warm all over. I love that you personified autumn with human characteristics. The picture is perfect for the poem. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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This is a poem that makes you warm all over. I love that you personified autumn with human characteristics. The picture is perfect for the poem. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Shanbreen!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your lovely review!
Comment from donette1914
wow what a lovely poem you wrote with a warm fireplace and all the wonderful food to eat
I really like the artwork chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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wow what a lovely poem you wrote with a warm fireplace and all the wonderful food to eat
I really like the artwork chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello donette!
So very pleased you enjoyed my ode to Autumn!
Such a glorious season!
Thank you for your lovely review!
Comment from fm wright
A very wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 ode to autumn contest. The words are as inviting as the artwork and really speaks about this time of year. I wish you the very best with this piece as it is beautifully written.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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A very wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 ode to autumn contest. The words are as inviting as the artwork and really speaks about this time of year. I wish you the very best with this piece as it is beautifully written.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Friend!
So very pleased you enjoyed!
I so love Autumn...and Spring, Summer, and Winter! Who can choose? :)
Thank you for your lovely review!
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I agree. Who can choose for they are all beautiful. As for the review, you're welcome.
Comment from RodG
I like how you Welcome Autumn's arrival with praise and personify her with the word "Dear." You succinctly point out the contrast of crisp cool days and warm hearth blazes.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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I like how you Welcome Autumn's arrival with praise and personify her with the word "Dear." You succinctly point out the contrast of crisp cool days and warm hearth blazes.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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Hello Rod!
So very pleased you enjoyed my 5/7/5 "ode!"
I attempted to included everything I love about Autumn...and a bit of rhyme. A tad bit challenging, but I loved the write!
Thank you!
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Well, this one got my vote. Good luck. Rod
Comment from Kelly Grim
Wonderful! "sing praise" is lovely and "crisp harvest days" and "warm hearthside blaze" are wonderful! I enjoy the rhyme of praise with the end of lines 2 and 3! Great contest entry!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Wonderful! "sing praise" is lovely and "crisp harvest days" and "warm hearthside blaze" are wonderful! I enjoy the rhyme of praise with the end of lines 2 and 3! Great contest entry!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Kelly!
I am so pleased you enjoy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful/complimentary review!
So appreciated!
