I Always Thought
Loop Poetry Contest Submission43 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is such a lovely poem! There's such sadness here... but also nostalgia. You've executed the loop so well... that repeated word never feels like it's just repeated... if you know what I mean! Very well done! Beautiful imagery, sitting and chatting, seeds sown... Again, a lovely loop!!!
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This is such a lovely poem! There's such sadness here... but also nostalgia. You've executed the loop so well... that repeated word never feels like it's just repeated... if you know what I mean! Very well done! Beautiful imagery, sitting and chatting, seeds sown... Again, a lovely loop!!!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this beautifully and skillfully written love story in poem form. I love the way that the story unfolds of a timeless love that endures beyond the grave. I enjoyed reading this Idamarty! Well done!
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I like this beautifully and skillfully written love story in poem form. I love the way that the story unfolds of a timeless love that endures beyond the grave. I enjoyed reading this Idamarty! Well done!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Aries Poet
What a beautiful loop poem. Life can get in the way of our dreams and time passes so quickly, before you know it, you have aged and your dreams become unfulfilled dreams that only stay in your memories. So sad. That the best friend died that shared those dreams. I can so relate to this poem from my own personal experience.
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What a beautiful loop poem. Life can get in the way of our dreams and time passes so quickly, before you know it, you have aged and your dreams become unfulfilled dreams that only stay in your memories. So sad. That the best friend died that shared those dreams. I can so relate to this poem from my own personal experience.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from donette1914
simply lovely and the words really came from your heart
I really like the artwork. chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
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simply lovely and the words really came from your heart
I really like the artwork. chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, I know what you speak of, Idamarty. I also hoped to spend my final years with a loving partner but life doesn't always go according to our plans. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I'm starting to enjoy these loop poems. They're fun, with the repetitious last and first words. Well done.
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Yes, I know what you speak of, Idamarty. I also hoped to spend my final years with a loving partner but life doesn't always go according to our plans. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I'm starting to enjoy these loop poems. They're fun, with the repetitious last and first words. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from fm wright
A most wonderful entry for the loop poetry contest. I like the way one line flows into the other all while keeping the train of thought going. I can find no fault with this poem and wish you all the best for the contest.
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A most wonderful entry for the loop poetry contest. I like the way one line flows into the other all while keeping the train of thought going. I can find no fault with this poem and wish you all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautifully stirring write, even in flow and rhyming rhythm and in full compliance with the prompt. I found it a lovely and gently absorbing read. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a beautifully stirring write, even in flow and rhyming rhythm and in full compliance with the prompt. I found it a lovely and gently absorbing read. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from karenina
This struck a nerve...plucked an emotional string...time steals away while we are busy making plans, as they say. SO many "moments" I wish I had back, to say that thing I meant to say, or sit in silent reverie with a loved one... Beautifully penned loop poetry.
Karenina
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This struck a nerve...plucked an emotional string...time steals away while we are busy making plans, as they say. SO many "moments" I wish I had back, to say that thing I meant to say, or sit in silent reverie with a loved one... Beautifully penned loop poetry.
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
A very emotive poem full of both sadness and grief at the loss of someone significant, but also happy too as you recount fond memories. Great loop poem, works effortlessly x
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A very emotive poem full of both sadness and grief at the loss of someone significant, but also happy too as you recount fond memories. Great loop poem, works effortlessly x
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from victor 66
Yes, of all the emotions, those brought on by the loss of loved one and the wish to have more time and better used time is hard. I suspect that most of us at a certain stage of our lives feel or will feel the same way. Well said.
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Yes, of all the emotions, those brought on by the loss of loved one and the wish to have more time and better used time is hard. I suspect that most of us at a certain stage of our lives feel or will feel the same way. Well said.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018