My Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Poop Happens"My life after meeting Jim.
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Comment from LaFrance
An interesting subject to write about, poop. I get your symbolism of its use. That you were the one to clean up all the mess through the years. When reading your chapter seemed little-crunched thoughts. Other than that it was interesting.
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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An interesting subject to write about, poop. I get your symbolism of its use. That you were the one to clean up all the mess through the years. When reading your chapter seemed little-crunched thoughts. Other than that it was interesting.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your comments. I was going for the blog effect.
Comment from royowen
I've been saying for years, that every man, woman, and child have been given a set of skills designed for the clockwork function of mankind, and I can see where yours lie dear friend, at least you can look with satisfaction that you've truly served. Well done, beautifully and humbly written great job, a most enjoyable read. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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I've been saying for years, that every man, woman, and child have been given a set of skills designed for the clockwork function of mankind, and I can see where yours lie dear friend, at least you can look with satisfaction that you've truly served. Well done, beautifully and humbly written great job, a most enjoyable read. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your kind comments. I am glad you enjoyed it. Blessed be.
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Most welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful reflective 'ramble' is absolutely enjoyable! With this style of write, it doesn't all have to be perfect and the commas don't all have to be in the right place...this is just great! I do hope you do more of these because you have a knack...even with 'digressings' because they make it all the more entertaining!!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing! :) ;)
P. S. Probably should be 'at least not fully'. :) :)
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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A wonderful reflective 'ramble' is absolutely enjoyable! With this style of write, it doesn't all have to be perfect and the commas don't all have to be in the right place...this is just great! I do hope you do more of these because you have a knack...even with 'digressings' because they make it all the more entertaining!!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing! :) ;)
P. S. Probably should be 'at least not fully'. :) :)
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and enjoying my ramblings, I really appreciated your kind comments. I will take care of that P.S. (smile)