Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

I see you're quite the poet too Bill. I like the picture that you selected for your poem, which is really cute and light-hearted after reading your chapters. LOL
Judy

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks, Judy. I do a bit of everything.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, love this little fellow and the poem. it's a riot. You are so very good at these. Would you know, I'm running out of words and that would never do. The site wouldn't let me. All the best. Ulla:))

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Ok, probably not intentional, but I got a chuckle out of this one, Bill. How, 'gulp,' interesting that creature is...my son, burly and stalwart as he is, would RUN - I'd dare say, Dwight would not find refuge in our home, LOL. Expertly penned short write with excellent presentation and clean language/verbiage and oh, so humorous content - in my book, anyways :) We have a pesky Dwight, he's a ginormous wasp! Eek.
Janelle

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks, Janelle, for the positive review for Dwight.