This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Tommy"Third book in the time travel trilogy
37 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
The Vice Admiral is quite a brute and definitely not a woman's libber. haha
You certainly captured the attitude of the period.
Poor Gladys.
Now, what will our two heroines do to right this wrong?
Will Gladys ever gain the courage to stand up to him?
What will her son do with his anger?
So many questions keep us reading.
This is going to be another great adventure. I can tell.
:) ellen xoxox
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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The Vice Admiral is quite a brute and definitely not a woman's libber. haha
You certainly captured the attitude of the period.
Poor Gladys.
Now, what will our two heroines do to right this wrong?
Will Gladys ever gain the courage to stand up to him?
What will her son do with his anger?
So many questions keep us reading.
This is going to be another great adventure. I can tell.
:) ellen xoxox
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Hi Ellen! Thank you so much for your wonderful review and the stunning 6 stars! Yes,it was a time when women decided, enough was enough, but my goodness, the men didn't like it, and this story is based on just one family. There were so many more women who went through what Gladys did. Researching this book has really opened my eyes to what a huge debt we owe those ladies. It's lovely to see you again, my friend. Thank you for coming across and reading this chapter. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Adri7enne
Wow! Your story made me very happy to have been born in my time and not back then. I think I might have been charged with murder had I been treated so badly by a man. Thank heavens things have changed so much, at least in the western world. I enjoyed the way you wrote the story - the intensity of the feelings. How monstrous the husband was! A real sociopath. Little wonder the kid wanted him dead. Good story, sandra. I'll watch for more of it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Wow! Your story made me very happy to have been born in my time and not back then. I think I might have been charged with murder had I been treated so badly by a man. Thank heavens things have changed so much, at least in the western world. I enjoyed the way you wrote the story - the intensity of the feelings. How monstrous the husband was! A real sociopath. Little wonder the kid wanted him dead. Good story, sandra. I'll watch for more of it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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LOL! What a brilliant review! I love it. Thank you so much. I would hate to have lived in those days, the women were so brave to stand up and demand women's rights, knowing what they would go home to. And yes, there are still countries where the men are allowed to treat women like slaves! Thank you for coming to read my story, it's lovely to have you. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that
is full of action that is both surprising
and also horrifying, as we meet Gladys's husband.
-We see Mildred in a whole new light, as
she refuses to tolerate his actions
and tries to protect those around her,
including Gladys and her son.
-The Vice Admiral certainly reacts
strongly against anything to
do with the suffragette movement.
-I imagine, for him, a woman's place
is in the home to obey her husband,
and not express views of her own.
-He is intolerable to his own son.
-I don't know how he will fit into
the story as it progresses, and
the consequences for Gladys and her son.
-However, we can assume that Ver. and Mildred
will be there, doing their best to help, with
assistance from James likely at some point,
and maybe even communication between
Tommy and Ver.'s children.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that
is full of action that is both surprising
and also horrifying, as we meet Gladys's husband.
-We see Mildred in a whole new light, as
she refuses to tolerate his actions
and tries to protect those around her,
including Gladys and her son.
-The Vice Admiral certainly reacts
strongly against anything to
do with the suffragette movement.
-I imagine, for him, a woman's place
is in the home to obey her husband,
and not express views of her own.
-He is intolerable to his own son.
-I don't know how he will fit into
the story as it progresses, and
the consequences for Gladys and her son.
-However, we can assume that Ver. and Mildred
will be there, doing their best to help, with
assistance from James likely at some point,
and maybe even communication between
Tommy and Ver.'s children.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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LOL! Pam, You certainly have worked this out. Yes, Gladys and Tommy feature hugely in this book, so does the 'husband'. There will be a few twists and turns, and some 'awww' moments as well as some 'grrrr' moments! But, I'm not telling you anything else!!! LOL. Researching for this book, has been an eye-opener to what women had to put up with. It makes me so angry that men could be so cruel and believe they had every right to be so. (which, according to the law in those days, they did have!) Thank you for another wonderful review, my dear friend, and for the lovely stars as well. Big hugs!! Sandra xxxx
If you post, make sure its still on there on Sunday. :))) xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. I appreciate your comments about my having things figured out--I am sure there will be a good number of twists and turns; otherwise, the story wouldn't be too good! LOL If I remember right, even when a woman was widowed back in that time, she didn't count for a whole lot, and wasn't necessarily entitled to benefits. It is a great topic for the book.
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It would be great for a whole saga, but I think I've ruled that out now using it for this trilogy. But, there might be a way... who knows? I'm off to bed now, my friend, with a smile on my face at your kind words. Night, night, dear friend. :) x
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It would be a big undertaking. Do you remember Heidi M on FS who wrote about that Texas poorhouse? She covered some of those issues. Glad it was all smiles before bed time🙂🙂
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Maybe you should re-title this series to This Bad Guy - That Bad Guy.
V.A. Charles Pembroke supplies an excellent reason for the suffragette movement.
He reminds me of a character in the Selfridge series called Lord Loxley,
someone who is easy to detest.
Spunky "young" Mildred should be quite interesting.
It looks like you've got a wealth of material to write the third book
and a major situation for Veronica and Mildred to tackle.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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Hello Sandra,
Maybe you should re-title this series to This Bad Guy - That Bad Guy.
V.A. Charles Pembroke supplies an excellent reason for the suffragette movement.
He reminds me of a character in the Selfridge series called Lord Loxley,
someone who is easy to detest.
Spunky "young" Mildred should be quite interesting.
It looks like you've got a wealth of material to write the third book
and a major situation for Veronica and Mildred to tackle.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
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I love that title!!! LOL, Robert, you do come up with some fantastic reviews! Having done a lot of research lately about the suffragettes, I've been surprised at how awful women's lives were, and how brave they were to face their 'gentlemen' husbands. Yes, Mildred will come into her own in this book, still the sweet, gentle soul, but with a lot more get up and go! V.A, Charles is typical of many noble and titled gentlemen back in those days. Some still are. Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my dear friend, and the lovely review. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Tpa
Hooray for Mildred and Hooray to you for an excellent chapter. I really enjoy the 'thought process' you give your characters and how well you describe their actions that give a vivid picture to your audience. Nice going!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Hooray for Mildred and Hooray to you for an excellent chapter. I really enjoy the 'thought process' you give your characters and how well you describe their actions that give a vivid picture to your audience. Nice going!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Tpa, what a lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed this chapter and hope to see you again! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Ooh, what a great chapter! I really enjoyed the tension, twists and turns, and seeing Mildred the Champion of Underdogs do her thing!
What a complete and contemptible turd her husband is.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Ooh, what a great chapter! I really enjoyed the tension, twists and turns, and seeing Mildred the Champion of Underdogs do her thing!
What a complete and contemptible turd her husband is.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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LOL, I know a few turds!!! Thank you so much, Sue, for this lovely review and the wonderful 6 stars! You always make me laugh with your descriptions! Bless your lovely heart, my friend. :))) Sandra xxx
Comment from rwilliam
Mildred stared back, not in the least intimidated. Another change! 'I can't tell you exactly when we met, but I believe we were having afternoon tea at the time. --Maybe it's me and my lack of understanding but I had to read this three times to understand. I THINK the 'another change' is Veronica's thought's about Mildred, correct? If so I'd give it it's own line to separate it from what Mildred is saying. Like this: Mildred stared back, not in the least intimidated.
Another change
'I can't tell you exactly when we met, but I believe we were having afternoon tea at the time... BUT I could be all wrong so just my thought. :)
Wonderful story. So in this one, Mildred & Veronica can be seen by everyone? And Mildred was able to physically stop this man from hitting his boy. Interesting twist.
Good chapter. I enjoyed it very much! :)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Mildred stared back, not in the least intimidated. Another change! 'I can't tell you exactly when we met, but I believe we were having afternoon tea at the time. --Maybe it's me and my lack of understanding but I had to read this three times to understand. I THINK the 'another change' is Veronica's thought's about Mildred, correct? If so I'd give it it's own line to separate it from what Mildred is saying. Like this: Mildred stared back, not in the least intimidated.
Another change
'I can't tell you exactly when we met, but I believe we were having afternoon tea at the time... BUT I could be all wrong so just my thought. :)
Wonderful story. So in this one, Mildred & Veronica can be seen by everyone? And Mildred was able to physically stop this man from hitting his boy. Interesting twist.
Good chapter. I enjoyed it very much! :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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HI Rebecca, thank you so much for this helpful review and all those stars. You are right, it was Veronica's thoughts, and I immediately went in and did as you suggested. Her thoughts are on a separate line now! Yes, they can be seen, it was necessary in this story, as you will see later. But, surprises are in store. :)) Thank you again, my dear friend!! Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh my! What a terrible man, but in those days women were more property then people or partners. As always very well done. I saw no errors and look forward to the next chapter. Rox
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Oh my! What a terrible man, but in those days women were more property then people or partners. As always very well done. I saw no errors and look forward to the next chapter. Rox
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Rox. I'm just glad I didn't live in that time. I would have been a suffragette too! Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from LaRosa
Wow, this is powerfully told and deserves a Six!
You carry the reader from emotion to emotion, effortlessly, creating an almost fearful desire to see how it will end.
I wanted to hit him back too!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Wow, this is powerfully told and deserves a Six!
You carry the reader from emotion to emotion, effortlessly, creating an almost fearful desire to see how it will end.
I wanted to hit him back too!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, LaRosa, for this really lovely review. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, OMG...just got to love Mildred....and Veronica...let me tell you...if it had been me...that man had better sleep with one eye open...come morning...he would had been a eunuch...he wouldn't have a bat...to go with those balls...well they are learning why they were sent there sweet girl...another awesome chapter...to an awesome story...soooooo very well written you...love you lots my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
spent today running mom to the store again...she is like a child in her mind...all the big fat people had the carts today ...again...she can only stand a short time...so we sit a lot...and that's fine with me...she told me she needed new pants...so I told her to get what she wanted...she has soooo many clothes...but...it made her smile...and she got a cd by Joey and Rory...Joey passed away...but they sang beautiful music...they were married...and we ordered her a Peter, Paul, and Mary cd last night...so she's so excited...but tonight she said she was feeling tight in her chest..I told her to go lay down...and listen to her music...she said she would take her night pills...and she is doing better now...tomorrow we are staying home...I need to wash her sheets...and shampoo her carpets...aren't vacations fun???...LOL...LOL...my brother does this all the time...so he went to Georgia to get away...and so I truly don't mind...
say hi to Ian for me...and you both take care...love you soooo xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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HI Sandra, OMG...just got to love Mildred....and Veronica...let me tell you...if it had been me...that man had better sleep with one eye open...come morning...he would had been a eunuch...he wouldn't have a bat...to go with those balls...well they are learning why they were sent there sweet girl...another awesome chapter...to an awesome story...soooooo very well written you...love you lots my sweet friend...Linda xxoo
spent today running mom to the store again...she is like a child in her mind...all the big fat people had the carts today ...again...she can only stand a short time...so we sit a lot...and that's fine with me...she told me she needed new pants...so I told her to get what she wanted...she has soooo many clothes...but...it made her smile...and she got a cd by Joey and Rory...Joey passed away...but they sang beautiful music...they were married...and we ordered her a Peter, Paul, and Mary cd last night...so she's so excited...but tonight she said she was feeling tight in her chest..I told her to go lay down...and listen to her music...she said she would take her night pills...and she is doing better now...tomorrow we are staying home...I need to wash her sheets...and shampoo her carpets...aren't vacations fun???...LOL...LOL...my brother does this all the time...so he went to Georgia to get away...and so I truly don't mind...
say hi to Ian for me...and you both take care...love you soooo xxoo
Comment Written 02-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2018
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OMG! Can I pinch that expression of yours? .he wouldn't have a bat...to go with those balls..... LOL! I love that, it's a classic! Thank you so much for this lovely review, and for making me howl with laughter! And a humongous hug for the super six!!!
It's wrong that your mother has to walk because the fatties can't be bothered to do a bit of exercise. It's a big worry, and I really feel for you. I haven't heard of Rory and Joey, but I know and love Peter, Paul and Mary's songs. I'll have to look the other two up on Google. You must have a really lovely brother, who, like you, loves his mother a lot. The way I looked at it, was my mum did all that for me when I was a child, and it was my turn to do the same for her. I still miss her and think of lots of things I didn't do and wish I had. I am banking on me meeting her again when it's my turn. Best do, or I'll have a hell of an argument with the Boss man!! LOL. You carry on doing what you do so well, and that's just being you.You're doing a grand job! Love you loads, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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yes you are more than welcome to pinch that expression...LOL...so glad it made you laugh...use anything I say at your own risk....LOL....soooooooooo welcome ...always...love to you much...xxoo
I feel the same as you do about our mothers...today she is slower...but she does have a good day too...my brother is so easy going...him and I think alike...we both go with the one day at a time theory....well I made mom some Tacos....so better help her...have a wonderful day...love you much...xxoo