FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Labor Day.""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
61 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fun write, easy to read and understand - a tribute to a particular state of affairs, the need for human responsibility and effort - it is important to feel and be productive always, even into our "Golden" years, perhaps beyond...
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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In my opinion, a fun write, easy to read and understand - a tribute to a particular state of affairs, the need for human responsibility and effort - it is important to feel and be productive always, even into our "Golden" years, perhaps beyond...
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Hello, evesayshi: Thank you for using your valuable time to view and complement my work here. People like you are why I'll keep on writing . There's more to come. God bless you, evesayshi. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome, Rhonnie, an outstanding piece...Eve
Comment from kleck140
Your poetry is super for humor and a good change for me as I needed a little light hearted reading today. You certainly
made my day. Thanks for sharing. I can't critique as I am not a poet but did enjoy reading your poetry.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Your poetry is super for humor and a good change for me as I needed a little light hearted reading today. You certainly
made my day. Thanks for sharing. I can't critique as I am not a poet but did enjoy reading your poetry.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Hello, Kleck140: Thank you for this delightful, helpful, and encouraging review. I made your day. WOW! I'm so glad that I can make someone else glad. That's what I'm writing for. There's more to come. God bless you, kleck140. rhonnie69.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Neonewman
Ha!
I enjoyed this wonderfully crafted little husband and wife battle of wits. Great flow and down right believable lol. I will be looking forward to retirement some day.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Ha!
I enjoyed this wonderfully crafted little husband and wife battle of wits. Great flow and down right believable lol. I will be looking forward to retirement some day.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2018
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Hello Neonewman: Thank you viewing my work here, and for giving it such a positive review. I work hard to entertain my readers in a positive way. Comments like yours encourage me to keep on keeping on writing for my readers. There's more to come. God bless you, Neonewman. Cordially: rgonnie69.
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Entertained you did my friend. My pleasure
Comment from Nanny 6
LOL... I love the style that you created on this poem... Very fun read. The best part about it, it's so real in today's America, there's probably a lot of households who have this very conversation.
Judy
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LOL... I love the style that you created on this poem... Very fun read. The best part about it, it's so real in today's America, there's probably a lot of households who have this very conversation.
Judy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from LaFrance
Your poem is funny and witty, a nice read for labor day. So true on the male behavior, if you feed him he would do most anything. What's going to happen when female behaviors catch up?
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Your poem is funny and witty, a nice read for labor day. So true on the male behavior, if you feed him he would do most anything. What's going to happen when female behaviors catch up?
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Shanbreen
It's good as a humoristic write-up, but I find it hard to recognize this as a poem. Yes two people, both retired, can make one go back to work.=). Love the play on words -- tired and retired.
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It's good as a humoristic write-up, but I find it hard to recognize this as a poem. Yes two people, both retired, can make one go back to work.=). Love the play on words -- tired and retired.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from fm wright
A very humorous poem indeed. I like the way it goes all the way from beginning to end. A real spoof on Labor Day. It flows very well in thought and rhythm. Enjoyed the read.
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A very humorous poem indeed. I like the way it goes all the way from beginning to end. A real spoof on Labor Day. It flows very well in thought and rhythm. Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from Hitcher
She is a clever woman and obviously a darn good cookš??? We men do love our food and we love it even more when some else is cooking it . Take or threaten to take that away and it can unsettle and spur one into action... Nice!
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She is a clever woman and obviously a darn good cookš??? We men do love our food and we love it even more when some else is cooking it . Take or threaten to take that away and it can unsettle and spur one into action... Nice!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from royowen
It serves the silly man well, to argue with a woman who has a much swifter mind the her poor, idle hubby, who sounds a little lethargic when it comes to working, an excellent poetic lesson in shared rhetoric, the hubby out of of his depth. Well done Rhonnie, great write, blessings, Roy
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It serves the silly man well, to argue with a woman who has a much swifter mind the her poor, idle hubby, who sounds a little lethargic when it comes to working, an excellent poetic lesson in shared rhetoric, the hubby out of of his depth. Well done Rhonnie, great write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
Comment from jdrhye
This is cute, funny and quite witty. I was not sure where this was going but am glad I kept reading. The not knowing is the enticer. It has a good flow and tone. I appreciate the humor!
J
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This is cute, funny and quite witty. I was not sure where this was going but am glad I kept reading. The not knowing is the enticer. It has a good flow and tone. I appreciate the humor!
J
Comment Written 04-Sep-2018
