Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think Notre (Dame) is spelt with an (E) at the end Bill. You are so inventive with these made up words, sheer genius and I love it when poets play about with language! Step outside the literary box. Love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

I included an explanation to keep the current spelling. Thank you, Dolly.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Aug-2018

Great Bill x

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Clever! I like how you've borrowed from movies to create new critters with fun names. My favorite name is Totomodo.

Komofrodo, a hobbit pagan,
wore platform shoes to the prom. <-- My favorite activity... hard one to beat! LOL!

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thanks, Phyllis. I think I?ve exhausted my Komodo dragon inspiration.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 30-Aug-2018

Did you make a commodo dragon
that will flush you down the drain?

Or a dumbdodo dragon who's too
stupid to survive?

A tornodo dragon that will pick up your house with you in it?

A torpodo dragon that can blow you up from miles away?

A ridinrodo where a bull throws you in the dirt?