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Comment from ciliverde
You're such a great writer, Tony. I'm really pleased to see you writing prose, I am very much enjoying this mystery. I read all the chapters just now, but only reviewed this one, sorry about that. But your characters are engaging, and in the case of Helen, it seems that there's more to her than meets the eye.
Well done, keep going!!
Carol
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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You're such a great writer, Tony. I'm really pleased to see you writing prose, I am very much enjoying this mystery. I read all the chapters just now, but only reviewed this one, sorry about that. But your characters are engaging, and in the case of Helen, it seems that there's more to her than meets the eye.
Well done, keep going!!
Carol
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2018
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Very many thanks for engaging with this story, Carol. Much appreciated. Delighted that you thought this chapter worth six stars. Most affirming! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Mastery
Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
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Tons of good imagery in this chapter, Tony.
Like: "The wind caught my hat, and in running forward to recapture it, I tripped and fell onto a piece of broken glass. I felt a warm wetness on my sleeve as my right forearm started to ooze blood in sympathy with the tomatoes."
And:"I attempted a brave smile, but it came out as a weak, rather inane grin."
Also: " .....Standing right behind her, I was intoxicated by the musky, floral fragrance of her perfume. My heart started to beat a little faster as she donned her black sou'wester hat and turned to flash me a smile."
Good job from start to fini' Tony. :) Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018