Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This is a very nice light-hearted but realistic love poem. I like that you used the anatomy of the lobster to make your point and the forecast of the the realistic future of the result of your romance. A pleasant read.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thanks, MSJV, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! Brilliant! Love this poem, it's cute, funny, and so romantic in a fishy way! LOL. This is a wonderful contest entry, soooo unique it has to be a winner. Well done and good luck! :)) Sandra xx (still smiling!)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thank you, Sandra, for the great review. Bill

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very creative on the love poem and she is beautiful
it was a pleasure to read your work and thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
review by donette1914 Aug 10, 2018

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thanks, Donette

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Great imagery here. I liked it a lot, Bill and as per usual it written with a great sense of humour. I hope it will do well in the contest. You always have the ability to make me laugh. All the best. Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thanks, Ulla