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Comment from Shanbreen
Bill, I like the effort put in writing this poem, but I can't place it. Is it a free-style three line poem? Have you use some kind an accepted or created format? I must say it's unique, though.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Bill, I like the effort put in writing this poem, but I can't place it. Is it a free-style three line poem? Have you use some kind an accepted or created format? I must say it's unique, though.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Hi, Shanbreen. This is a 5-7-5. It is poem that is formatted like a haiku, but without all of the restrictions of that style. I will put the name of it in the notes. Thanks for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Sara Elizabeth
nice use of the 5-7-5 hakiu tructure, also I like that the poem has a clear subject, the elephino. Did take me a minute to question what it was, but finally got it. nice job!
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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nice use of the 5-7-5 hakiu tructure, also I like that the poem has a clear subject, the elephino. Did take me a minute to question what it was, but finally got it. nice job!
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Sara