Sunflowers
Poem 2/6/220 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem and an excellent subject choice of sunflowers which is one of my most favorite flowers. To see the fields in summer with sunflowers as far as we can see.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
  |
A very well-written 2-4-2 poem and an excellent subject choice of sunflowers which is one of my most favorite flowers. To see the fields in summer with sunflowers as far as we can see.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Yes aren't they just beautiful ..thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Air Spirit
This is lovely --- a poem that artfully selected words to create a canvas of coherent and fluid thought and an important message, that summer has arrived! The picture is wonderful and perfectly compliments the poem's attire... Excellent 2-6-2 entry..
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
This is lovely --- a poem that artfully selected words to create a canvas of coherent and fluid thought and an important message, that summer has arrived! The picture is wonderful and perfectly compliments the poem's attire... Excellent 2-6-2 entry..
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Great review zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-A good topic choice with
good imagery that paints
a picture of the summer scene.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-A good topic choice with
good imagery that paints
a picture of the summer scene.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Thanks for a superb review zanya
-
You are welcome, zanya.
Comment from jusylee72
Interesting and great use of the prompt, using so few words but describing a beautiful setting. I enjoyed it. I find these hard to write. This one seemed to flow out of you. congratulations, on beauty well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
Interesting and great use of the prompt, using so few words but describing a beautiful setting. I enjoyed it. I find these hard to write. This one seemed to flow out of you. congratulations, on beauty well done.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Such encouraging words ..thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Very nice image. This is so very animated. It holds hope and cheerfulness. Sunflowers are so bright and really make themselves known, nothing shy about them. I love your choice of the word "unfurl". That's what makes this such a uniques poem with a uniques image. Well chosen. Well written.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
Very nice image. This is so very animated. It holds hope and cheerfulness. Sunflowers are so bright and really make themselves known, nothing shy about them. I love your choice of the word "unfurl". That's what makes this such a uniques poem with a uniques image. Well chosen. Well written.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Superb review --I like that idea 'nothing shy about them'! zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yes! Wouldn't even need the image with your concise yet descriptive words -- in only five words you conveyed bright and warm and sunshine!! :)
Thank you for the smile today and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
Yes! Wouldn't even need the image with your concise yet descriptive words -- in only five words you conveyed bright and warm and sunshine!! :)
Thank you for the smile today and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Great review zanya
Comment from Elizabeth Brown
Sunflowers and summer - lovely subjects to write a poem about. They go together so well, sunflowers being reminiscent of the sun. A good choice of vocabulary and this poem fits perfectly in the 2-6-2 syllable poem contest. Elizabeth.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
Sunflowers and summer - lovely subjects to write a poem about. They go together so well, sunflowers being reminiscent of the sun. A good choice of vocabulary and this poem fits perfectly in the 2-6-2 syllable poem contest. Elizabeth.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Superb review zanya
-
You're welcome!
Comment from victor 66
You have a very nice photo presentation to go along with minimalist poem. 2-6-2 seems easy but to come up with ten syllables with a good configuration that says something is tricky. I won't go on how your sunflowers remind me of my youth, but I will tell you that you have a good entry and I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
You have a very nice photo presentation to go along with minimalist poem. 2-6-2 seems easy but to come up with ten syllables with a good configuration that says something is tricky. I won't go on how your sunflowers remind me of my youth, but I will tell you that you have a good entry and I wish you luck.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
And thanks for taking time to engage with this little poem zanya
-
You are welcome, Zanya.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I wanted to transport myself into that photo. How beautiful. This is a great 2-6-2. Your format is well-done and this is a solid entry. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
I wanted to transport myself into that photo. How beautiful. This is a great 2-6-2. Your format is well-done and this is a solid entry. I wish you lots of luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Aren't sunflowers simply beautiful ! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have seen fields of gold like this in the south of France where I once owned a house, it was a joy to see them everyday, your poem reminded me of what I am missing in Limoux, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
|
I have seen fields of gold like this in the south of France where I once owned a house, it was a joy to see them everyday, your poem reminded me of what I am missing in Limoux, love Dolly x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018
-
Yes I agree - in France they are splendid..thanks for reading zanya
