Comment from royowen

Excellent

We've found the odd carcass of a rat in the recesses of our shed from time to time Bil, but we've had a few cats over the years, that have been good Micers, I thought Gerbils were comfined to Africa or Asia. But I loved this poetic foray into this, most imaginitve post My friend Bill, well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018

Thanks, Roy

reply by royowen on 12-Jul-2018

Well done Bill,

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

Gerbilcide haha, what a sad poem and funny as well, but it makes me more sad that I thought the death of gerbils was funny, great entry for the contest, thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 12-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2018

Thanks, Phillip