Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

This is funny because it brings back memories.
Beep, beep comes to mind, I can see and hear the cartoon now.
The colors goes with the poem and your punctuation marks as good as well.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, art, for the exceptional review. Bill

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Yes! I remember them well and I used to laugh so much! They have been recorded in our history along with everything else. Loved your tribute to these two, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I must admit, I've always enjoyed watching Wile E. Coyote, and the fortunately blessed roadrunner, who, seemingly not as bright as the clever coyote nevertheless always manages to outsmart the cunning coyote but is untarnished and untouched by the encounters, well done Bill, another very cute and well written Post, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, Roy.

reply by royowen on 19-Jun-2018

Welcome Bill

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

they are doing shift work on an assembly line at Acme Enterprises. a good, fun write about everyone's favorite cartoon (sorry Bugs) very goo, Bill...........meeshu

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, meeshu

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, their cartoon was great! I wonder where they are. Kids today don't know of the really good fun cartoons. Your picture is a perfect choice for your well chosen words. Good job on some rhymes. I like the line about 'until gravity change your mind.' Thanks for sharing a fun poem. Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thank you, Jan.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Your 9X9 is likely a lot trickier to write than it may appear. I always find the nine syllable lines a wee challenge, but you've done it like a pro.

I never really watched much of the roadrunner and the coyote as the outcome always seemed pretty predictable.

That said, your poem is delightfully original and much enjoyed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, Gloria

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Perhaps they are still going at it on YouTube? Fun poem, Bill! The rules of gravity or any type of physics don't seem to apply in quite the same manner for bird and canine.

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

I learned about levers, pulleys, explosives, and the unluckiest creature alive.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

lol,i loved watching these two growing up as a kid, the road runner great write, brought back some memories on this.Thanks for the share and have a great day

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018

Thanks, William, for giving this a look. Bill