Dolly
Her faith makes her whole20 total reviews
Comment from jlsavell
good evening dearest friend,
It goes without saying how much I love your didactic poetry. This is you true niche and it is your signature. Love it truly.. and adore you. Thank you for being a friend...
jimi
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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good evening dearest friend,
It goes without saying how much I love your didactic poetry. This is you true niche and it is your signature. Love it truly.. and adore you. Thank you for being a friend...
jimi
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hello Possum, Glad to see you back. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed a little of our belief. Love you too. Kay XX
Comment from mermaids
I like the line "Her church is nature blue". It shows the impact of nature and how nature can guide us. This is a wonderful faith based poem that captures another viewpoint on the world. I like how you express in words that this lady should be respected for her wisdom.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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I like the line "Her church is nature blue". It shows the impact of nature and how nature can guide us. This is a wonderful faith based poem that captures another viewpoint on the world. I like how you express in words that this lady should be respected for her wisdom.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Elaine, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed something different. Love, Kay.
Comment from aryr
Very well done Kay, it has a wonderful rhyme pattern and is rather easy to read and to understand. Great picture. I really liked the way you presented Dolly's faith and culture. You did a great job making readers understand that to be different is to be okay and that one should not walk away or turn away just because they don't understand. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Very well done Kay, it has a wonderful rhyme pattern and is rather easy to read and to understand. Great picture. I really liked the way you presented Dolly's faith and culture. You did a great job making readers understand that to be different is to be okay and that one should not walk away or turn away just because they don't understand. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello Aryr, Thanks for reading, glad you liked our point of view. Love, Kay.
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You are most welcome Kay.
Comment from tfawcus
A sky dancer - the name says it all, really. How much more in touch with the natural order of things are those whose beliefs are founded in the environment around them.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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A sky dancer - the name says it all, really. How much more in touch with the natural order of things are those whose beliefs are founded in the environment around them.
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you my friend, glad you liked nature's own religion. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, this is an excellent entry for the Faith Poetry contest. Each verse in perfect rhyme to tell a story of how loving the land and every living being is a better way of living - compared to the judging white man and his preconceptions. I especially enjoyed that this piece offers some insight into the indigenous race of Australia. A beautiful picture that extends the story in grace. Best of luck in the competition and enjoy the six shower : -) ~DD
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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K, this is an excellent entry for the Faith Poetry contest. Each verse in perfect rhyme to tell a story of how loving the land and every living being is a better way of living - compared to the judging white man and his preconceptions. I especially enjoyed that this piece offers some insight into the indigenous race of Australia. A beautiful picture that extends the story in grace. Best of luck in the competition and enjoy the six shower : -) ~DD
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for the great review; more to faith than brick buildings. Love, Kay.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, what do white men know anyway...they can't jump...
it's people like Dolly who teach us about what life is truly all about...and about faith...and God...love your poem Sweetie Pie...and your picture is priceless...very well written...love you much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hi Kace, what do white men know anyway...they can't jump...
it's people like Dolly who teach us about what life is truly all about...and about faith...and God...love your poem Sweetie Pie...and your picture is priceless...very well written...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello Lindy Lou, Thanks so much for your kind review; we worship nature not bricks. Love you much too! Bless you Kace.
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you would think...you are so very welcome Sweetie Pie...smiling big....Bless you as well...love you...xxoo
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You describe this lady Dolly and the way her beliefs have formed her character so well, Kay. I especially like the third stanza. Not sure about the widgidee grubs, though. I'd rather have chocolate. Great work. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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You describe this lady Dolly and the way her beliefs have formed her character so well, Kay. I especially like the third stanza. Not sure about the widgidee grubs, though. I'd rather have chocolate. Great work. :) Nancy
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello fancy Nancy, Thanks so much for reading, widgidee grubs are sweet like shrimps. Much love, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
This is an absolutely marvelous and beautiful entry for this contest. It tells a lovely story and also teaches those of us unfamiliar with Bahaime. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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This is an absolutely marvelous and beautiful entry for this contest. It tells a lovely story and also teaches those of us unfamiliar with Bahaime. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello Sasha, Bless you for the great review; we worship nature, not bricks and mortar. Love, Kay.
Comment from Madison Nicole
That last comment made the entire poem... it is such a powerful line. You did a stunning job, and each word spoke to me. Keep up the good work! God bless.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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That last comment made the entire poem... it is such a powerful line. You did a stunning job, and each word spoke to me. Keep up the good work! God bless.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello new friend Madison, Many thanks for reading and so pleased you enjoyed. Our religion is nature and all the birds and animals are sacred. Love, Kay.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Aussie, this is great, I loved it, and being Australian, I can relate to this so much. She is indeed full of love and grace. Loved the first verse, such a good image for introducing Dolly. Beautiful writing and I saw no errors.
A poem I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana. :)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello Aussie, this is great, I loved it, and being Australian, I can relate to this so much. She is indeed full of love and grace. Loved the first verse, such a good image for introducing Dolly. Beautiful writing and I saw no errors.
A poem I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana. :)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hello dear friend, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed our worship of nature. Blessings, Kay.