Beneath the roar
The purrfect cover up.16 total reviews
Comment from E. B. Ross
You packed a lot into those six words. Sounds like a commentary on the current social climate. But it could also be referencing a man's vibrato masking his insecurities...Very nice entry, you should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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You packed a lot into those six words. Sounds like a commentary on the current social climate. But it could also be referencing a man's vibrato masking his insecurities...Very nice entry, you should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Right on both observations. Thsnks for reviewing.
Comment from Old Soldier
That's no way to talk about us old guys. I am not sure about the lion but I've got the blue pill. ;). Well written. Not much more this old cat can growl about. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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That's no way to talk about us old guys. I am not sure about the lion but I've got the blue pill. ;). Well written. Not much more this old cat can growl about. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Ha ha. Thanks for reviewing
Comment from Mary Jane Y
Short but follows the rules. A lot said about egos in very few words. Like the picture very effective. Doesn't take much to knock down a over the top ego.
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Short but follows the rules. A lot said about egos in very few words. Like the picture very effective. Doesn't take much to knock down a over the top ego.
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
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Thanks for reviewing
Comment from Alexander Vasa
ahahahahah Did you mean for this to be funny? I found it funny and a few people who think they're lions sprang to mind. I noticed no errors, just good word choices, and nice publishing. A strong entry for the contest and best of luck, Ana.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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ahahahahah Did you mean for this to be funny? I found it funny and a few people who think they're lions sprang to mind. I noticed no errors, just good word choices, and nice publishing. A strong entry for the contest and best of luck, Ana.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Jyes it was intended to bring a smile to those who know a few candidates. Thsnks for tr5
Comment from ciliverde
This is a great one, you really hit the nail on the head here. They probably have Harleys too. Nice job of saying quite a bit in just six words - not an easy feat!
Well done,
Carol
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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This is a great one, you really hit the nail on the head here. They probably have Harleys too. Nice job of saying quite a bit in just six words - not an easy feat!
Well done,
Carol
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thanks fot the kind review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an good entry for the 'Six Word' writing prompt.
Your message is clear in your short verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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I think this is an good entry for the 'Six Word' writing prompt.
Your message is clear in your short verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Sharon.
