True Riches
A Poem dedicated to the best father a son could have...54 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
Excellent Dean well written rhymed and metered verses on the riches of memories on the one loved and admired. Great piece for fathers day. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Excellent Dean well written rhymed and metered verses on the riches of memories on the one loved and admired. Great piece for fathers day. Thanks for the share and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for reading, William, and for the six stars as well.
Sorry for the delay in responding.
With my dad passing away recently I've fallen a bit behind.
It's not that I don't appreciate your input because I do.
It's just been a little crazy around here lately.
Thanks so much again.
Comment from aanneee
I am so very sad that I do not have a 6 to give you for this most touching write, I do have tears though, that is for sure. I am so sorry for your family's loss. The whole presentation is way beyond wonderful It touches so very much...even the beating heart has to have a say. Well! I have to go and find a tissue...but I do thank you so much for the way you have honored your father and for sharing...Dinah
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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I am so very sad that I do not have a 6 to give you for this most touching write, I do have tears though, that is for sure. I am so sorry for your family's loss. The whole presentation is way beyond wonderful It touches so very much...even the beating heart has to have a say. Well! I have to go and find a tissue...but I do thank you so much for the way you have honored your father and for sharing...Dinah
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
Much obliged for the R&R.
~Dean
Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be a very heartfelt and delightful recognition of a dearly beloved father. So well done in all dimensions as always from this brilliant author/HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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I found this to be a very heartfelt and delightful recognition of a dearly beloved father. So well done in all dimensions as always from this brilliant author/HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for reading, Vance, and for the six stars as well.
Sorry for the delay in responding.
With my dad passing away recently I've fallen a bit behind.
It's not that I don't appreciate your input because I do.
It's just been a little crazy around here lately.
Thanks so much again.
Comment from WalkerMan
Yes, having a father you could look up to as a hero is beyond price. Even though his condition meant you saw this moment coming, it is not any easier. The important thing is the time you had with him -- fishing, camping, talking, and just being together -- each being clear to the other about the unconditional love between you. Now I understand why your own heart is so caring.
My own father is gone more than a quarter century now, but I still feel his loving influence on me. From your beautiful words in this magnificent tribute to your dad, I am certain you will find similar comfort in the years ahead. You do indeed have True Riches.
The Six this post deserves (which I don't have) pales in comparison to the treasure you already have. He will live on in your memory, and in the memories of all others whose lives he touched.
This is still a time of raw emotion, so please know I care. You and he (though I never met him) will be in my thoughts and prayers, my friend. -- Mike
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Yes, having a father you could look up to as a hero is beyond price. Even though his condition meant you saw this moment coming, it is not any easier. The important thing is the time you had with him -- fishing, camping, talking, and just being together -- each being clear to the other about the unconditional love between you. Now I understand why your own heart is so caring.
My own father is gone more than a quarter century now, but I still feel his loving influence on me. From your beautiful words in this magnificent tribute to your dad, I am certain you will find similar comfort in the years ahead. You do indeed have True Riches.
The Six this post deserves (which I don't have) pales in comparison to the treasure you already have. He will live on in your memory, and in the memories of all others whose lives he touched.
This is still a time of raw emotion, so please know I care. You and he (though I never met him) will be in my thoughts and prayers, my friend. -- Mike
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks for the kind condolences, Mike.
Take care.
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You are most welcome, Dean. I am here for you, my friend, if you ever want to talk by PM, whatever the subject. -- Mike
Comment from MissMerri
I can't imagine a more beautiful gift to give a parent, Dean. It made me cry. It is in perfect meter and rhyme, of course, but the part I enjoyed most was seeing your true heart in every line. It is a much more attractive heart than that pulsing blue one. I loved this poem so much I read it three times. It is wonderfully tender and full of love. It didn't hurt either, that you added one of my favorite songs ever... sung by Eva Cassidy. Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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I can't imagine a more beautiful gift to give a parent, Dean. It made me cry. It is in perfect meter and rhyme, of course, but the part I enjoyed most was seeing your true heart in every line. It is a much more attractive heart than that pulsing blue one. I loved this poem so much I read it three times. It is wonderfully tender and full of love. It didn't hurt either, that you added one of my favorite songs ever... sung by Eva Cassidy. Thanks!
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for reading, MM, and for the six stars as well.
Sorry for the delay in responding.
With my dad passing away recently I've fallen a bit behind.
It's not that I don't appreciate your input because I do.
It's just been a little crazy around here lately.
Thanks so much again.
Comment from DALLAS01
A poignant tribute to a father who left a lasting impression. Mine passed in 2000 but his presense is felt in every aspect of my life till this day. How lucky we truly are.
Sorry for your loss, but he will continue to be by your side.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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A poignant tribute to a father who left a lasting impression. Mine passed in 2000 but his presense is felt in every aspect of my life till this day. How lucky we truly are.
Sorry for your loss, but he will continue to be by your side.
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for reading, Alice, and for the six stars as well.
Sorry for the delay in responding.
With my dad passing away recently I've fallen a bit behind.
It's not that I don't appreciate your input because I do.
It's just been a little crazy around here lately.
Thanks so much again.
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So sorry for your loss
So lucky to have had a father that deserves to be so truly mourned
Comment from Rasmine
Dean,
I am so sorry!! I lost my dad about ten years ago (always bad at years). Know he is still with you in spirit. When Dad died, I felt someone standing behind me at the bus stop. I just knew it was him.
((( Dean )))) (those are hugs. Beautiful music.
Love,
Nome
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Dean,
I am so sorry!! I lost my dad about ten years ago (always bad at years). Know he is still with you in spirit. When Dad died, I felt someone standing behind me at the bus stop. I just knew it was him.
((( Dean )))) (those are hugs. Beautiful music.
Love,
Nome
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
Much obliged for the R&R.
~Dean
Comment from Kerry Foley
Oh Dean, Again I'm so sorry to hear about your Dad. Wow, 13 kids, he sounds like a wonderful man who always put his family first. This is a beautiful poem you've penned in dedication to him. I love the intimate conversations in the 3rd and 4th stanza, they're real tear-jerkers. Such lovely artwork and video as well. I noticed his Birthday, December 17, 1937, so weird, my Dad was born the next day, the 18th 1937. He passed when I was young though. Take care, Dean. Love & Hugs! xo
~Kerry
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Oh Dean, Again I'm so sorry to hear about your Dad. Wow, 13 kids, he sounds like a wonderful man who always put his family first. This is a beautiful poem you've penned in dedication to him. I love the intimate conversations in the 3rd and 4th stanza, they're real tear-jerkers. Such lovely artwork and video as well. I noticed his Birthday, December 17, 1937, so weird, my Dad was born the next day, the 18th 1937. He passed when I was young though. Take care, Dean. Love & Hugs! xo
~Kerry
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for reading, Kerry, and for the six stars as well.
Sorry for the delay in responding.
With my dad passing away recently I've fallen a bit behind.
It's not that I don't appreciate your input because I do.
It's just been a little crazy around here lately.
Thanks so much again.
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It was my pleasure. No worries on the late response, understandable. I've been delayed on everything, lol.
Comment from padumachitta
Oh geez Dean. You have my condolences. It sounds, from your poem, that this man was not only your father but also a man who you loved and respected. This is the highest honor, to have a son who liked his papa as a person.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Oh geez Dean. You have my condolences. It sounds, from your poem, that this man was not only your father but also a man who you loved and respected. This is the highest honor, to have a son who liked his papa as a person.
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
Much obliged for the R&R.
~Dean
Comment from Marvin Calloway
I can appreciate both ends of this thoughtful poem.
As a son, I wish I had done better.
As a father, I wish I had done better.
Thanks for stirring up feelings which should be contemplated much more often.
Marv
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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I can appreciate both ends of this thoughtful poem.
As a son, I wish I had done better.
As a father, I wish I had done better.
Thanks for stirring up feelings which should be contemplated much more often.
Marv
Comment Written 30-May-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks.
I appreciate the read & review.
Take care,
~Dean