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Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
This is disturbing and very funny. Yeah how'd you like to come to terms with having sex and then having them try to eat you alive... and not in a good way... shudder.
lol
GMG
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Hi Bill,
This is disturbing and very funny. Yeah how'd you like to come to terms with having sex and then having them try to eat you alive... and not in a good way... shudder.
lol
GMG
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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That would call for a psychologist or ?prying mantis?.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile Bill, an inventive write and PMSD will now be recorded in the medical journals, ha ha ha, whatever next, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
He he he, this made me smile Bill, an inventive write and PMSD will now be recorded in the medical journals, ha ha ha, whatever next, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute poem you have penned about the praying mantis. You used very cute words and the picture looks like it is totally wigging out! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 24-May-2018
This is a very cute poem you have penned about the praying mantis. You used very cute words and the picture looks like it is totally wigging out! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
Even praying/preying mantis has its struggles but the victims more so. This is a well done 5-7-5 and the image is striking. You are on a roll. It makes me wonder what is coming next. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Even praying/preying mantis has its struggles but the victims more so. This is a well done 5-7-5 and the image is striking. You are on a roll. It makes me wonder what is coming next. Marilyn
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Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn