Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

I was confused by the notation with the title of "a5-7-5" -- how is that related to this two verse poem of 8-8-8-8?

The rhyme is effective and the poem would be a great entry in a diet book as after reading it, one does not feel compelled to eat.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks, my, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

Haha, oh how I enjoy your reads my friend, your pieces always appeal to my humor, and it was worded well with no flaws, so it was flawless, good work

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks, Phillip, for the great review. Bill

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

YUCK>Bill??? (lol)

I LOVE Hummingbirds
by dawn, for Bill

Nature's cruel;
no doubt about it.
Only one way
to re-route it:
spend your time
in joy's reflection;
then you'll see her
pure perfection.

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 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

I understand that praying mantis make great pets.

reply by Dawn Munro on 17-May-2018

LOL!!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I did not know that and it is horrific as often nature is and the strength of the praying mantis is astounding. 'Remove and eye to make a hole', oh my goodness! Something out of a horror movie, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

I saw a film of a mantis waiting on a hummingbird feeder and grabbing one.