Comment from Ginnygray

Excellent

Very nicely paired tankas on a journalist photo shoot! The photo was bombed by the sea dollar and sea cents are all so very creative phrases in the poem! I enjoyed and chuckled at this one!

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reply by the author on 12-May-2018

Thanks, Ginny

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Hah! I bet they were just do ABSORBED in their charges while SOAKING UP the papparazi attention. I HEEARD half were cited for their SALTY LANGUAGE! The judge eill MOP THE FLOOR with them and their attorneys will leave them high and DRY!


(Chuckling here)

Karenina

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 Comment Written 12-May-2018

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reply by the author on 12-May-2018

Thanks, Karenina. Your extended metaphors have me beat.

reply by karenina on 12-May-2018

THAT, my friend is because I am tortured an hour per day by an evil being known as SPONGEBOB SQUAREPANTS (thanks to my four year old grandson)---SMILE.

Comment from dginnh

Excellent

Hi Bill, This was very funny, and an excellent read first thing in the morning, I liked the line, "sea cents spent of fees and fines" nice! So keep up the good work. Dave

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reply by the author on 12-May-2018

Thanks, Dave.