A son's dream
The day I was born46 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I was born in 1947. My father died when I was just fifteen. My mother was a nurse with two jobs at different hospitals. She had her kids, her work and her drinking. She made sure we had everything we needed. She died at the age of 61, a year before she was going to retire. Growing up, I was very angry about her drinking. As the years passed after her death and especially now; if I ever get a chance to see her in the afterlife, I would tell her how sorry I am. The only thing she did, was sometimes made me feel embarrassed when she drank. She did so much more for us kids than that. Thank you for the "therapy poem".
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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I was born in 1947. My father died when I was just fifteen. My mother was a nurse with two jobs at different hospitals. She had her kids, her work and her drinking. She made sure we had everything we needed. She died at the age of 61, a year before she was going to retire. Growing up, I was very angry about her drinking. As the years passed after her death and especially now; if I ever get a chance to see her in the afterlife, I would tell her how sorry I am. The only thing she did, was sometimes made me feel embarrassed when she drank. She did so much more for us kids than that. Thank you for the "therapy poem".
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Victor, as kids we don't see them as they are and sometimes as adults as well. When we reflect back is when the true beauty of it all comes into play.
Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless
Steve
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You are most welcome, Steve.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Fifty years have now slipped by; quickly it did seem
Many nights have disappeared since I had that dream
Every day I thank the lord for there will be no other
that could ever take the place of my precious mother
This is so very touching and moving well done kindest regards and blessings Meia xx
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Fifty years have now slipped by; quickly it did seem
Many nights have disappeared since I had that dream
Every day I thank the lord for there will be no other
that could ever take the place of my precious mother
This is so very touching and moving well done kindest regards and blessings Meia xx
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Thank you Meia for this awesome review my friend. May you have a blessed day.
Steve
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO NEONEWMAN: I like your attitude about your mother. Concerning, Mom we have similar feelings. "I love you, Mom. You are like my life. I'll only get one. And I thank our Lord, Jesus, that I got both from Him, through you, Mom. Thank you. And thank you for sharing, Neonewman. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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HELLO NEONEWMAN: I like your attitude about your mother. Concerning, Mom we have similar feelings. "I love you, Mom. You are like my life. I'll only get one. And I thank our Lord, Jesus, that I got both from Him, through you, Mom. Thank you. And thank you for sharing, Neonewman. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Wow! I love energy and this review is packed full of it. Thank you for that and God bless your mother as well.
Steve
Comment from fivecardstud1247
I am glad I still had one to give you this should win. It sure beats mine. I don't mind at all. good job. outstanding you did not need a picture with it at all. GB
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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I am glad I still had one to give you this should win. It sure beats mine. I don't mind at all. good job. outstanding you did not need a picture with it at all. GB
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank you for this beautifully crafted, exceptional review. I am so happy this piece(which is dear to me) has been so well received.
God bless
steve
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is such a wonderful poem of your love for your dear mother. It's a perfect gift to give her for Mother's Day, I know I would be delighted to receive it. Good luck in the contest, it's perfect! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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That is such a wonderful poem of your love for your dear mother. It's a perfect gift to give her for Mother's Day, I know I would be delighted to receive it. Good luck in the contest, it's perfect! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank for this most uplifting review Sandra.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Swampfox1
A very , very, fine tribute to your mother. That is correct, as your wonderful poem states, there is no other place any person would rather be than in the saving grace of the precious mother. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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A very , very, fine tribute to your mother. That is correct, as your wonderful poem states, there is no other place any person would rather be than in the saving grace of the precious mother. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank you for the awesome review Swampfox1.
God bless
Steve
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You're welcome, Neonewman
Comment from Ben Colder
Good tribute to your mother . I think it is after they depart from the earth then we begin to realize how precious the moments of the days. Best to you.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Good tribute to your mother . I think it is after they depart from the earth then we begin to realize how precious the moments of the days. Best to you.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank you Ben for the awesome review. I am blessed to still have both of my parents still. Can't imagine life without them.
God bless
Steve
Comment from jenintorre
You sure have got a good memory l.o.l I loved this poem . It is so sincerely written.
It brought tears to my eyes and it is very original in format.
I wish you good luck in the competition. You have my vote.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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You sure have got a good memory l.o.l I loved this poem . It is so sincerely written.
It brought tears to my eyes and it is very original in format.
I wish you good luck in the competition. You have my vote.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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LOL! Thank you Jenintorre for this excellent review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Katya
Now this poem is a downright beautiful tribute to your mother! I love the thought of the scared newborn recognizing the voice that sang to them before they were born.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Now this poem is a downright beautiful tribute to your mother! I love the thought of the scared newborn recognizing the voice that sang to them before they were born.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank you Katya for this beautiful review.
God bless
Steve
Comment from karenina
Sweet, sweet poem. Nice when sons let their emotions flow ...
Clear as a mountain stream with appreciation and awe at just how selfless their mother's have always been for them. Secret? Your well being is our joy!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Sweet, sweet poem. Nice when sons let their emotions flow ...
Clear as a mountain stream with appreciation and awe at just how selfless their mother's have always been for them. Secret? Your well being is our joy!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Awe! Thank you Karenina for this amazing review my friend.
God bless
steve
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Your Mom did a great job raising you!
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Thank you
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