Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun write Bill and you made me smile. In the UK they have a character called Spong Bob Square pants! You may want to look him up and include him in your Spong writes! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Sponge Bob is here too. My kids, who are in their thirties now, loved that show. I watched a few episodes @nd found it to be hilarious. Lots of @dult humor that goes over kids? heads.

Comment from Peter@Poole

Average

Sorry but i can't relate to these verbal creations and cannot suggest how to improve them. I believe it is better to be blunt and honest. Sincerely, Peter at Poole.

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 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Your review is neither blunt or honest. Just a bunch of worthless words you probably cut and paste to save time, steal points, and be a dick.

reply by Peter@Poole on 03-May-2018

You can't learn if you're not prepared to consider why I've written thus. I don't want to waste a reviewer but I'm not one to scratch your back if you'll scratch mine, which seems to be the ethos of too many on this site. If one could afford it, even an illiterate person could buy approval for his or her writing, but it would be worthless. Sorry Bill, I really am. Peter

reply by the author on 03-May-2018

You actually don?t have to review people. You could say to yourself, ?II I can?t be constructive, maybe I should just keep my useless and undirected comment to myself.?

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the tale how three sponges met each other and became a sponge array, their earlier named eloped , the porifera became a family; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Fun, playful homage to the unforgettable Brady bunch song of our youth. This might make a fun contest -- to parody a song from the old shows. Thanks for the smile it evoked.

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks, mv, for singing along.

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Oh, Bill, this is a fun parody of the Brady Bunch theme song I soaked up. Your take on it is delightful:

Here's the po-em of a sponge named Zoham,
that was bringing up three thirsty, porous pods;

I can put your new lyrics to the old song in my head. I love your inclusion of scientific terms like "porifera." Your lyrics made me smile.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks, Andre

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Too cute!! I enjoyed reading your little poem with the Brady tune cadence running through my head. Kudos to the scientific info that you included! Well done!

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 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks, Sugarray