Here we go Loop T Loop
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem. Each line flow flawlessly from the one to the next without losing the idea of the poem. When we are focused on the task we cannot mess up or lose the quest.
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reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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A very well-written loop poem. Each line flow flawlessly from the one to the next without losing the idea of the poem. When we are focused on the task we cannot mess up or lose the quest.
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Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Thank you so much Sandra !!!
Comment from HaleyBel
Hi, I enjoyed your loop to loop. Welcome back to you. I have just joined.
An expression of clarity and determination.
My least favourite part is 'heightened clears lenses' I really liked from lenses right through to diminishes though. Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Hi, I enjoyed your loop to loop. Welcome back to you. I have just joined.
An expression of clarity and determination.
My least favourite part is 'heightened clears lenses' I really liked from lenses right through to diminishes though. Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 03-May-2018
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Thank you Haley for the discerning thoughts... :-)
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You are welcome