This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Goodbye, Joe."Veronica is sent back again
34 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sandra, So it had a happy ending for Joe and for all the rest of them. Again a wonderful chapter, and so well written. That Mildred is a rascal. Now, I wonder what will happen next. Hugs from Massachusetts. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Awe, Sandra, So it had a happy ending for Joe and for all the rest of them. Again a wonderful chapter, and so well written. That Mildred is a rascal. Now, I wonder what will happen next. Hugs from Massachusetts. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, Ulla. It's so nice that you would come on while on your holiday. I really appreciate the thought. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandar xx
Comment from Blue Hendrix
I think this is a lovely story and I could feel the emotions of the characters as I read. I want to know the rest of the story so it definitely grabbed me I saw no grammatical errors or spelling errors. Job well done!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I think this is a lovely story and I could feel the emotions of the characters as I read. I want to know the rest of the story so it definitely grabbed me I saw no grammatical errors or spelling errors. Job well done!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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That is so nice of you to come in almost at the end and give me such a lovely review. You are so kind. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this part. Big hugs! :) Sandra. xx
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
With a jolt, I found myself being scrutinized by Mildred.
'I'm back!' I laughed and reached out to take Mildred's hand. 'I know how it all ended for Joe's family and Francis.' She squeezed my hand and gave me a knowing look. 'I thought that might happen,' she said with a chuckle. 'Now you can tell me all about it over a nice cuppa tea....' There is such warmth and moving sentiments in your stories. I love your writing style and content and it is always a joy to read. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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With a jolt, I found myself being scrutinized by Mildred.
'I'm back!' I laughed and reached out to take Mildred's hand. 'I know how it all ended for Joe's family and Francis.' She squeezed my hand and gave me a knowing look. 'I thought that might happen,' she said with a chuckle. 'Now you can tell me all about it over a nice cuppa tea....' There is such warmth and moving sentiments in your stories. I love your writing style and content and it is always a joy to read. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you, dear friend, for this lovely review. I'm so happy you are enjoying my story. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from JDRBAR
A perfectly written conclusion to this episode of Veronica's interactions with Joe and his family, if indeed it is the end. I have a feeling a new adventure is in the wings.
I hope your brother is doing well now.
Diane
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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A perfectly written conclusion to this episode of Veronica's interactions with Joe and his family, if indeed it is the end. I have a feeling a new adventure is in the wings.
I hope your brother is doing well now.
Diane
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much, Diane, for the lovely 6 stars!! There are four more parts, (2 chapters) to come which will tie up all the loose ends and leave an opening for the third book in the trilogy. I'll have a bit of a break between the two while I do some more editing of this one.
I just rang the hospital, Ian is delirious and keeps forgetting things that he's just done. I'm hoping it's all the drugs they have him on. I'll be seeing him later. Thanks for asking, that was so kind of you. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from karenina
I did not note any errors. You write in an even, conversational style that welcomes the reader in. I amwading in midstream but found I could suspend disbelief and simply enjoy the story...
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I did not note any errors. You write in an even, conversational style that welcomes the reader in. I amwading in midstream but found I could suspend disbelief and simply enjoy the story...
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Karenina, for 'wading in midstream' (lol) I'm so pleased you were still able to enjoy reading this part. So very encouraging! :) Big hugs. Sandra xx
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I pro m i se my next rainy day belongs to you!
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I hope it rains soon! lol. xxx
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Me too...for purposes of cozying up and reading.....
Comment from Swampfox1
I think that I am finally getting used to the accents and dialects in here, finally. That must be a good thing. As always, I like the way it reads, the way it flows, and the good news is that I haven't found any errors, yet. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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I think that I am finally getting used to the accents and dialects in here, finally. That must be a good thing. As always, I like the way it reads, the way it flows, and the good news is that I haven't found any errors, yet. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much, Swanpfox, for this lovely review. I'm glad you are getting used to the dialect! :) Sandra xxx
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You're welcome
Comment from royowen
You will, or already are, a celebrity author, you are a most imaginative and perceptive writer, I explained to a new author, that a successful writer has a highly developed perception and intuition, and you have bucket loads of those gifts, as well as the obvious attributes. Congratulations my friend, until the next time, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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You will, or already are, a celebrity author, you are a most imaginative and perceptive writer, I explained to a new author, that a successful writer has a highly developed perception and intuition, and you have bucket loads of those gifts, as well as the obvious attributes. Congratulations my friend, until the next time, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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What a lovely compliment, Roy, thank you so very much. I really appreciate your encouraging comments! :)) Four more parts to go, and then the editing begins in earnest. :( Big hugs, dear friend. :) Sandra xxxx
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I'm a fan Sandra
Comment from Alexander Vasa
'Oh, Lordy, Miss Veronica, I'm not a geri thingy, yet,' she moaned.
Hello Sandra, you have a knack for writing dialogue so you hear hit in your head. That is just one of many examples of it in your story. I always enjoy your work when I read it, your characters are easy to imagine and you have a lovely mix of showing through dialogue, and descriptors. Peppering your descriptions throughout, rather than the dollop approach, LOL
Thanks for being generous with your talent and sharing your writing, it is a work I'd recommend, Ana.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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'Oh, Lordy, Miss Veronica, I'm not a geri thingy, yet,' she moaned.
Hello Sandra, you have a knack for writing dialogue so you hear hit in your head. That is just one of many examples of it in your story. I always enjoy your work when I read it, your characters are easy to imagine and you have a lovely mix of showing through dialogue, and descriptors. Peppering your descriptions throughout, rather than the dollop approach, LOL
Thanks for being generous with your talent and sharing your writing, it is a work I'd recommend, Ana.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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What a lovely review, Ana, thank you so much! I'm so pleased you are enjoying this story. :)) Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from meeshu
this is so well written as you have such a good grasp of the vernacular. the dialogue is crisp and poignant. the scene setting is vivid.....well written, Sandra......meeshu
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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this is so well written as you have such a good grasp of the vernacular. the dialogue is crisp and poignant. the scene setting is vivid.....well written, Sandra......meeshu
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Meeshu, for this really nice review of this part. I really appreciate all your comment! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Harry Smith
Congratulations on your book. This chapter is very well written with lots and lots of imagery and emotions. the reader really enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Congratulations on your book. This chapter is very well written with lots and lots of imagery and emotions. the reader really enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hello, Harry, thank you so much for this lovely review and congratulations. That is so kind of you. I'm glad you are enjoying this book. big hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
