Celebrating Persephone's Return
Second Place Winner: Farewell, winter!33 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Minute poems are hard to write and make them flow as brilliantly as this one does, great rhymes and warm sentiments for spring, just perfect, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Minute poems are hard to write and make them flow as brilliantly as this one does, great rhymes and warm sentiments for spring, just perfect, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello Dolly!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Though shared by all, I think spring really is hope-filled, especially as I get older. Or maybe we just have more time to notice the renewal and promise of ease of day. Such welcome colours in the spring. Thanks for a lovely poem.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Though shared by all, I think spring really is hope-filled, especially as I get older. Or maybe we just have more time to notice the renewal and promise of ease of day. Such welcome colours in the spring. Thanks for a lovely poem.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and review!
diane
Comment from ameen786
Hello Mrs.KT and thank you for sharing as well as educating the readers with this wonderful verse and a lesson in mythology; simply brilliant!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello Mrs.KT and thank you for sharing as well as educating the readers with this wonderful verse and a lesson in mythology; simply brilliant!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Oh my goodness, ameen!
Thank you ever so much for your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
So very appreciated.
diane
Comment from lyenochka
I remember reading about Persephone back in middle school. It seemed so poetic then - at the cost of just three pomegranate seeds. Like the way you present the renewal of life that comes with spring.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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I remember reading about Persephone back in middle school. It seemed so poetic then - at the cost of just three pomegranate seeds. Like the way you present the renewal of life that comes with spring.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
YOU HAVE SUMMED IT ALL UP IN
FEW VERY EXCEPTIONAL WORD UNFOTUNATELY
I'M OUT OF SIXES TO GIVE BUT IT'S WELL DERSEVED
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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YOU HAVE SUMMED IT ALL UP IN
FEW VERY EXCEPTIONAL WORD UNFOTUNATELY
I'M OUT OF SIXES TO GIVE BUT IT'S WELL DERSEVED
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello Abby!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO MRS. KT: I like your poem here because it reminds me of a springtime song that my classmates and I used to sing when I was in fourth grade; on each and every springtime occasion. Here are the lyrics: "Welcome sweet springtime, we greet you in song. Murmurs of gladness falls on the air. Sunshine awakes all the flowers from sleep. Hail we the glad new year." That springtime melody was so much fun for my classmates, me, and our teacher too. I enjoy reading poems like yours, MRS. KT. Encore. Please write more. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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HELLO MRS. KT: I like your poem here because it reminds me of a springtime song that my classmates and I used to sing when I was in fourth grade; on each and every springtime occasion. Here are the lyrics: "Welcome sweet springtime, we greet you in song. Murmurs of gladness falls on the air. Sunshine awakes all the flowers from sleep. Hail we the glad new year." That springtime melody was so much fun for my classmates, me, and our teacher too. I enjoy reading poems like yours, MRS. KT. Encore. Please write more. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello rhonnie!
So pleased you enjoyed and that my poem brought back memories for you!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from meeshu
very nice minute poem, KT. springtime is great subject matter for this poetry style. bouncy and fun. I'm a Greek mythology geek and your telling of Persephone's tale is spot on............meeshu
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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very nice minute poem, KT. springtime is great subject matter for this poetry style. bouncy and fun. I'm a Greek mythology geek and your telling of Persephone's tale is spot on............meeshu
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2018
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Hello meeshu!
I taught mythology for years, and Persephone's story is my all-time favorite...
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Celebrating Persephone's Return", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Celebrating Persephone's Return", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Stellar minute poem, Diane. Perfect iambic metre, love rhymes and that photo looks just like the valley I live in. Gorgeous.
Top notch poem and best of luck to you in the contest, my friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Stellar minute poem, Diane. Perfect iambic metre, love rhymes and that photo looks just like the valley I live in. Gorgeous.
Top notch poem and best of luck to you in the contest, my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello Gloria!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary reivew!
diane
Comment from N. Rabwar
I like the title. It has a hopeful energy and flows well. I think it is a good minute poem contest entry. It is interesting to see an example of this form of poetry as I am not familiar with it.
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I like the title. It has a hopeful energy and flows well. I think it is a good minute poem contest entry. It is interesting to see an example of this form of poetry as I am not familiar with it.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2018