Comment from
Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Oh my goodness! Your 3/5/3 is delightful - a winner for certain. It is filled not only with the proper syllabic requirements, but it possesses delightful visual imagery written by a poet who definitely knows the habits of hummingbirds!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from
Gloria ....
Very beautiful entry into this contest, author. Hummingbirds are really something to watch and of course feeding them with sweet drinks.
A beautiful presentation and perfectly written submission.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
Many thanks for your positive feedback!