Interdependency
5/7/5 Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a lovely message to write about. "Helping hands!" I loved the photo you chose! A well-written 5-7-5 haiku. This is a good one for the contest. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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What a lovely message to write about. "Helping hands!" I loved the photo you chose! A well-written 5-7-5 haiku. This is a good one for the contest. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hello Cindy!
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from karenina
I like a 5-7-5 that packs a punch of wisdom...
A truth that in some way improves my perceptions....
Kindness is like that...you get as much as you give.
Good luck to you in this poetry contest!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I like a 5-7-5 that packs a punch of wisdom...
A truth that in some way improves my perceptions....
Kindness is like that...you get as much as you give.
Good luck to you in this poetry contest!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Karenina,
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
diane
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My pleasure poetess....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so sweet, I love the picture and the poem. The birds have had a tough time of it this winter and have needed a helping had. We've had food out for our bird visitors, and some have stayed around. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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That is so sweet, I love the picture and the poem. The birds have had a tough time of it this winter and have needed a helping had. We've had food out for our bird visitors, and some have stayed around. Well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Sandra!
We had such a hard winter; I am really worried about the birds that flew here thinking spring had arrived = It hasn?t!
Thank you for the excellent rating and review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. It never matters who or what needs help we should always be willing to help wherever we can with what we can without expecting anything in return.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. It never matters who or what needs help we should always be willing to help wherever we can with what we can without expecting anything in return.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello Sandra!
Thank you ever so much for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from s.m.kirby
Yes that is so true,at one time or another all could use a helping hand.I enjoyed this 575 poem.The art work you chose is perfect for this.thanks for sharing, good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Yes that is so true,at one time or another all could use a helping hand.I enjoyed this 575 poem.The art work you chose is perfect for this.thanks for sharing, good luck.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you enjoy!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Geeps
Hey there. Good entry to the poetry contest. You fit the rules. And I would agree, we all depend on each other at some point in our lives to move forward.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hey there. Good entry to the poetry contest. You fit the rules. And I would agree, we all depend on each other at some point in our lives to move forward.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from meeshu
true words. a very nice bit of 5-7-5 poetry. to the point and with a pleasant message of helping. best of luck in the upcoming contest. this should do very well.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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true words. a very nice bit of 5-7-5 poetry. to the point and with a pleasant message of helping. best of luck in the upcoming contest. this should do very well.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello meeshu!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Symbiotic will draw the reader in because every one of us has been in a symbiotic relationship dozens of times a year. If someone thinks they can do something on their own, they clog the works up. It becomes a routine activity. If we cease respecting nature and feel we can be independent of it, we'll be sorely surprised. It's great that you chose a picture of nature because we all need to be reminded that despite our perspective, we are clearly in a symbiotic relationship with nature. I thank you and nature thanks you.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Symbiotic will draw the reader in because every one of us has been in a symbiotic relationship dozens of times a year. If someone thinks they can do something on their own, they clog the works up. It becomes a routine activity. If we cease respecting nature and feel we can be independent of it, we'll be sorely surprised. It's great that you chose a picture of nature because we all need to be reminded that despite our perspective, we are clearly in a symbiotic relationship with nature. I thank you and nature thanks you.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello Liz,
What an incredibly thoughtful review!
Thank you for your rating and your heartfelt comments...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks symbiotic truth, a lesson for living, interdependency is everywhere, whether in Nature or strangers, need of helping hands is always there; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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This speaks symbiotic truth, a lesson for living, interdependency is everywhere, whether in Nature or strangers, need of helping hands is always there; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello Friend,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review...
So pleased you enjoyed...
Comment from Artasylum
Symbiotic... should be for things living, spiritual, faith... it can related to so many things in our lives... What a great word... thanks for pointing it out. good read. good luck in your contest. yours, diana
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Symbiotic... should be for things living, spiritual, faith... it can related to so many things in our lives... What a great word... thanks for pointing it out. good read. good luck in your contest. yours, diana
Comment Written 18-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2018
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Hello diana,
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
So pleased you enjoyed!