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Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and comical rhyming poem about the parakeet. The picture you chose made me think of Big Bird on Sesame Street. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This is a very cute and comical rhyming poem about the parakeet. The picture you chose made me think of Big Bird on Sesame Street. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thanks Teri
Comment from apky
What about if my Polly is a cat who thinks she's a budgerigar - could the bird whisperer help me out here?
After all he's good with...
Anything from A to Zoo,
he'll teach your parakeet to do;
so call that number right away
make owning pretty Polly pay.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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What about if my Polly is a cat who thinks she's a budgerigar - could the bird whisperer help me out here?
After all he's good with...
Anything from A to Zoo,
he'll teach your parakeet to do;
so call that number right away
make owning pretty Polly pay.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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No, I'm sorry. He'll cash the check though.
Comment from Ogden
Bill, this poem is hilarious! I always get a twinge when reviewers tell me this, but I'd give it a sixer if I wasn't out of them, even despite one little hitch that I urge you to fix. I know you can come up with something better than the first two lines of stanza two.
What's funnier than 'hilarious?' I can say no more.
Don
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Bill, this poem is hilarious! I always get a twinge when reviewers tell me this, but I'd give it a sixer if I wasn't out of them, even despite one little hitch that I urge you to fix. I know you can come up with something better than the first two lines of stanza two.
What's funnier than 'hilarious?' I can say no more.
Don
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I agree the rhyme is forced and the meter off. I?ll keep thinking about alternative lines.
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Dan is a bird whisperer,
an all-things-ave ent?preneur ;
Comment from Henry King
A very humorous poem. I believe the vision is tongue-in-cheek. I take it that way, given all the animal trainers pitching their skills on TV. The very good rhyme makes the poem flow rhythmically. Well done.
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A very humorous poem. I believe the vision is tongue-in-cheek. I take it that way, given all the animal trainers pitching their skills on TV. The very good rhyme makes the poem flow rhythmically. Well done.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Dan is for real. (No he isn?t)
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It's fun. That's why I'm here. Mostly, I'm the butt or goat.
Comment from Pamusart
This is cute and clever and well rhymed. Lol. You seem to have your species mixed up. Or, am I? Isn't Big Bird a chicken. lol I honestly don't know. Thank you for sharing. I liked your previous ave post also. Take care
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This is cute and clever and well rhymed. Lol. You seem to have your species mixed up. Or, am I? Isn't Big Bird a chicken. lol I honestly don't know. Thank you for sharing. I liked your previous ave post also. Take care
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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The picture is of Dandy Dan, not a parakeet. Obviously. (Yuk yuk yuk)