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Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Bill, I think you must be very fond of birds. I like them too, you write these short works so well and they're very entertaining. The dialogue is so cute when the one birds says to the other that he's whistling at himself, LOL.
I saw no errors, and your publishing choices are great. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hello Bill, I think you must be very fond of birds. I like them too, you write these short works so well and they're very entertaining. The dialogue is so cute when the one birds says to the other that he's whistling at himself, LOL.
I saw no errors, and your publishing choices are great. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Ana
Comment from meeshu
big smiles on this one , bill. happy little poem with happy little rhymes.
also some great alliteration in this piece. poor Flit and Flut.........meeshu
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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big smiles on this one , bill. happy little poem with happy little rhymes.
also some great alliteration in this piece. poor Flit and Flut.........meeshu
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Meeshu
Comment from Michael Steinert
Hahaha, I really didn't expect the end there. I guess there will be no part three. I wish my poems flowed and rhymed as yours do. This is just a great lighthearted poem.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Hahaha, I really didn't expect the end there. I guess there will be no part three. I wish my poems flowed and rhymed as yours do. This is just a great lighthearted poem.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Michael. Just having some fun at birds' expense.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
You always make me smile. "I get them whistles all the time," made me laugh. Your dialog is always so lighthearted. The ending was a surprise, but it fits the poem so well.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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You always make me smile. "I get them whistles all the time," made me laugh. Your dialog is always so lighthearted. The ending was a surprise, but it fits the poem so well.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks, Cindy, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
What? There wasn't any kind of security system at the gym? Poor Flit and Flut! I don't think the extra tail muscles would have helped in this case. Another humorous one, Bill.
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What? There wasn't any kind of security system at the gym? Poor Flit and Flut! I don't think the extra tail muscles would have helped in this case. Another humorous one, Bill.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Well, you said nice things, but gave me a ONE. Is it my breath?
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Darn! My touch screen and fingers do funny things with that dropdown menu. Fixed. Thanks for pointing it out.