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Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from
damommy
Snot for feel is a little harsh. lol
However, he's never away from home. That's got to be nice. Poor snails. Many people don't like them, but I do.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
Snails need friends who aren?t hungry.
Comment from
karenina
He seems overly shy....
He really needs to get out of his shell.
Does he h s Vega name besides "lunch"????
Oh, thatched insensitive....
Brunch!
Karenina
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
I don?t know him personally
reply by karenina on 04-Apr-2018
Comment from
apky
Snot for feet he glides along, [I love this imagery]
Not a speedster, that's for sure;
Always home, though on the move,
In a world he must endure.
Look! It's a snail.
Yeah, what did you think, that it's an email?
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
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