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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from damommy
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Snot for feel is a little harsh. lol

However, he's never away from home. That's got to be nice. Poor snails. Many people don't like them, but I do.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    Snails need friends who aren?t hungry.
Comment from karenina
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He seems overly shy....
He really needs to get out of his shell.
Does he h s Vega name besides "lunch"????
Oh, thatched insensitive....
Brunch!

Karenina

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    I don?t know him personally
reply by karenina on 04-Apr-2018
    smile....Karenina
Comment from apky
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Snot for feet he glides along, [I love this imagery]

Not a speedster, that's for sure;

Always home, though on the move,

In a world he must endure.

Look! It's a snail.

Yeah, what did you think, that it's an email?

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    Well ? yeah.