Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good 'attempt at a Sonnet' as you put it.
Well rhymed, good rythm, well done.
And the artwork is lovely and a good match.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi Sharon Thanks for your review and I suppose attempt is a bit strong I enjoyed writing this and I also like the artwork it remined me of what Shakespear would have have written with Cheers Christine

Comment from apky

Excellent

Well, I think you are a wonderful bard on your own right and might need someone else calling you to help them with their sonnets and meter.

One's own mind is the perfect place for one's true love to dwell.

Even the great Shakespeare would agree on that one, I think.

Thanks for a wonderful piece that I thoroughly enjoyed.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi apsky, Thanks for a terrific review You have made my day I enjoyed writing this one and glad you enjoyed reading it Many Cheers Christine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

very fine, Chissy. they keep getting better. just imagine what April 29
will bring. Sonnets are difficult but you've done very nicely here.
good rhymes are the key.......meeshu

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi meeshu, Thanks for reading again and I liked this one so hopefully it will go over OK yes good rhymes are the key Cheers Christine

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A great sonnet Christine, I really enjoyed it, I am no expert but it flowed like a dream for me and your love of sonnets shone through, I liked all your rhymes too, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi Dolly, Thanks for reading my sonnet I hope ai did it justice a bit different and I know you write a lot of sonnets also so they are a challenge Cheers Christine

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, this is cute and witty, I enjoyed reading it, and you add the love a sonnet is supposed to have at the end, and we get a nice surprise to find your lover lives inside. Great rhythm and flow, also.

I saw no errors, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi Ana, Thanks for looking in on my Sonnet. They are challenging and I hope ot read OK and that William is not looking Ha Ha Cheers Christine

Comment from Katya

Excellent

Oh, VERY nice! I enjoyed the sonnet itself, your skillful meter and rhyme, and the lighthearted content.
For me, the feather in the picture is associated with a quill pen. Nice choice!

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi Katya, Yes you got it in one I thought the quill may be associated with the bard writing sonnets way back when. iam pleased you enjoyed my attempt much appreciated Cheers Christine

Comment from karenina

Excellent

There are sonnet police who may ask to see your poet's license but I think this is adorably brilliant....
Your Iambic pentameter was perfect, your rhymes on the nose....and the topic, love of poetry is current, goodness knows!

Karenina

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018

Hi Karenina, Thanks for your review and no doubt the Sonnet police will be out but so far haven't caught up with me I think I will lay low for a while although I have to do my next poem for tomorrow. you comments for this are so appreciated maybe It wasn't too bad afterall Cheers Christine

reply by karenina on 04-Apr-2018

Really good....and educational!

Karenina