Mystery of the Night
The moon's light is from the sun/mine from the Son40 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Mystery of the Night", is an extremely well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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"Mystery of the Night", is an extremely well-written and spiritually uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your spirited review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
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Liz,
You certainly deserved the spirited review.
Take care, best wishes and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from Katya
Oh, that's really nice! Good analogy, deftly handled, fine transition. Good sound throughout. Simple spiritual message. Enjoyable and appropriate picture. Excellent!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Oh, that's really nice! Good analogy, deftly handled, fine transition. Good sound throughout. Simple spiritual message. Enjoyable and appropriate picture. Excellent!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your inspired review. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
Comment from GWinterwin
Oh yes I love this poem and its message. Our light comes from the son not the sun. Great message here about knowing where our light comes from. Good rhyming and word flow make it easy to read and understand. God bless for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Oh yes I love this poem and its message. Our light comes from the son not the sun. Great message here about knowing where our light comes from. Good rhyming and word flow make it easy to read and understand. God bless for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your uplifting review. I'm glad you were able to expand on the thought. That was one of my intents.
Comment from Elizabeth Joanne
Very nice. Very inspiring that you look to the moon and realize that even the moon needs assistance in order to shine so beautifully. Great work, nice analogy. Good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Very nice. Very inspiring that you look to the moon and realize that even the moon needs assistance in order to shine so beautifully. Great work, nice analogy. Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for you uplifting reviews. I love writing with analogies. I'm glad you appreciated that.
Comment from estory
I liked the musical elements woven together here, the urgent personal voice. I think you make an interesting connection to Jesus here, through the moon. It somehow brings to mind the Virgin Mary, pointing the way to her Son. It speaks of how we reach out through physical images, to find spiritual renewal and uplift. interesting image idea. estory
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I liked the musical elements woven together here, the urgent personal voice. I think you make an interesting connection to Jesus here, through the moon. It somehow brings to mind the Virgin Mary, pointing the way to her Son. It speaks of how we reach out through physical images, to find spiritual renewal and uplift. interesting image idea. estory
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your inspired review. I can picture the image you refer too. We also know how many time Jesus used nature draw out certain important messages.
Comment from Poetic Friend
I really love this poem. Perhaps because I wrote a similar one, but I referenced the stars, instead of the moon. Your poem reads similar to a prayer (or a plea) to God for mercy and strength.
Great usage of the couplets and rhyme scheme.
I hope the poem did well in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I really love this poem. Perhaps because I wrote a similar one, but I referenced the stars, instead of the moon. Your poem reads similar to a prayer (or a plea) to God for mercy and strength.
Great usage of the couplets and rhyme scheme.
I hope the poem did well in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your inspired review. I'd love to read your stars poem. I learn much about my relationships, with myself, others & God.
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Likewise, Liz. The name of the poem is "Shine for Me, Evening Star".
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I looked for it in your portfolio. I sadly did not find it.
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You may copy and paste the below link for the poem:
http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=843856
Comment from Zue65
The author was able to explore the theme of change using the moon as a pivot point to deliver the message intended for the readers. The rhymes are quite smooth. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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The author was able to explore the theme of change using the moon as a pivot point to deliver the message intended for the readers. The rhymes are quite smooth. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your comprehensive review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from His Grayness
I really enjoyed this lovely work which I found to be beautifully presented in coloration, artwork, etc. the rhyme and pace of the poetry is beautifully delivered and overall, I cannot offer any suggestions to improve this lovely work in any way. My thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYESS
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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I really enjoyed this lovely work which I found to be beautifully presented in coloration, artwork, etc. the rhyme and pace of the poetry is beautifully delivered and overall, I cannot offer any suggestions to improve this lovely work in any way. My thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYESS
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your uplifting review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Oooooo...I love this poem you've penned about the moon, Liz. It sounds like a mystical spell, lol. There is great power in the Moon, quiet magical. ~Kerry
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Oooooo...I love this poem you've penned about the moon, Liz. It sounds like a mystical spell, lol. There is great power in the Moon, quiet magical. ~Kerry
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your inspired review. I'm pleased you caught the meaning of it.
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lol, my pleasure:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written spiritual poem. We sometimes need a guide to lead us and help us see what God wants us to do. When we look in nature we find many things to show us there is a God that makes it all.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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A very well-written spiritual poem. We sometimes need a guide to lead us and help us see what God wants us to do. When we look in nature we find many things to show us there is a God that makes it all.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your inspired review. As we know Jesus referred to nature several times to deliver the message of how God cares for us, lest we worry.
