Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Hey Bill Schott... I'm really liking your snail(s) a whole lot. I didn't know I lived so close to a mobile home park... keeping my eyes open... This is a funny idea and a fun read. thanks diana

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Thanks, Diana

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, snails do have "mobile homes." But I highly doubt that they will "speed off." They are always welcome to go because I do not like how they eat my flowers!

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Speed off. Verbal irony. Those snails are as fast as a photo finish.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem about the little snail in the mobile neighborhood. You used very cute descriptive words and I love the art work. They are very interesting little things! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. I saw no spag or errors. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Thanks, Teri