The Secret of the Rose
A Kyrielle16 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This poem is outstanding. It's subtle in its beautiful descriptive words and rhyming. It flows well from line-to-line and stanza-to-stanza. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
This poem is outstanding. It's subtle in its beautiful descriptive words and rhyming. It flows well from line-to-line and stanza-to-stanza. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Marilyn. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I really appreciated your kind comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks! Your good luck wishes must have helped to put it on the podium. I almost got my entry money back. LOL!
Best wishes, Tony
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Hi Tony. Maybe we could suggest the reverse order to Tom. I've noticed that too. What I usually do is scroll to the bottom till I get to the page of the first one, but it's time consuming and a pain in the neck, but at least then they are replied to in the order they were given. And you are very welcome. Your poems are outstanding. Marilyn
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, Secret of the Rose, has the right format and takes the reader throw the meeting, winning, consummating, and reproduction processes of love. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
This kyrielle, Secret of the Rose, has the right format and takes the reader throw the meeting, winning, consummating, and reproduction processes of love. Nice.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Bill. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I appreciated your kind comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks!
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from TheodoreJ
Beautiful image and imagery of your writing. I wish I understood the final 3 lines of the poem, but I don't think I am on the right track..nonetheless I love the rest and am happy to have read it this morning.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
Beautiful image and imagery of your writing. I wish I understood the final 3 lines of the poem, but I don't think I am on the right track..nonetheless I love the rest and am happy to have read it this morning.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Theodore. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I appreciated your comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks! Sorry that you found parts of it a bit obscure!
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love poems that include roses because they bring their perfume to me and yours is no exception, specially chosen words with great rhyming, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
I love poems that include roses because they bring their perfume to me and yours is no exception, specially chosen words with great rhyming, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Dolly. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I really appreciated your kind comments about my poem, "The Secret of the Rose". Many thanks!
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how a rose could keep a girl happy, the boy knew the secret of the rose; love begins; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
This speaks how a rose could keep a girl happy, the boy knew the secret of the rose; love begins; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Dr Alcreator. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I appreciated your comments about my poem "The Secret of the Rose", and your good luck wishes.
Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Artasylum
The rose has been the downfall of many a pure maiden those damn pheromones... good read with evil intentions. Great image. colors, font. looking forward, yours, diana
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
The rose has been the downfall of many a pure maiden those damn pheromones... good read with evil intentions. Great image. colors, font. looking forward, yours, diana
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Hi, Diana. I wish that there was an easy way of viewing reviews in reverse order! This, along with several others, has been buried beneath an incoming tide caused by my having posted three or four poems in quick succession! Apologies for the delay in responding.
I really appreciated your amusing comments about "The Secret of the Rose". Pheromones, be damned!
Best wishes, Tony
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I totally get it... it is happening to me as well. so thanks for answering. yours, di