A Magical Meeting
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your lovely verse is well written and well rhymed with a fun story.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for the verse.
Thank you for sharing this verse of the mystery musician with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Your lovely verse is well written and well rhymed with a fun story.
The picture is beautiful and a good match for the verse.
Thank you for sharing this verse of the mystery musician with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. Much appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
This has lovely rhyme and flow. You certainly describe a magical place. There is a hint of mystery about the mystery person playing the flute. He was not telling. All of us have places that seem to have some magical meaning, and this seems to be a special place for the narrator. We are left with the mystery surrounding the place, as the narrator expresses the hope of finding it again. Music certainly adds to the atmosphere of the place. Excellent work. judi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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This has lovely rhyme and flow. You certainly describe a magical place. There is a hint of mystery about the mystery person playing the flute. He was not telling. All of us have places that seem to have some magical meaning, and this seems to be a special place for the narrator. We are left with the mystery surrounding the place, as the narrator expresses the hope of finding it again. Music certainly adds to the atmosphere of the place. Excellent work. judi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Wouldn't it be wonderful to have a meeting like that? Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from emptypage
LOVE this one, Yvonne. I fell in love with the rhythmic feel before I ever got around to the words, but when I DID get around to the words...heaven.
Truly, it's a lovely piece and I appreciate the work you put into it.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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LOVE this one, Yvonne. I fell in love with the rhythmic feel before I ever got around to the words, but when I DID get around to the words...heaven.
Truly, it's a lovely piece and I appreciate the work you put into it.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you. That means a lot to me.
Comment from Marge Setzer
I like the fairy tale aspect of this poem. Thank you for the explanation of this Triquatrain. I went back to read it again specifically to learn how you accomplished this. Your choice of rhyming words within the third lines was exceptionally poetic. Making the second and last lines rhyme as well also showed great skill. I marvel that it doesn't seem contrived in any way, but flows easily. I think I would have difficulty putting one of these stanzas together to meet the requirements. The fact that you produced six and generated a fairy tale while doing it is very impressive. Marge
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I like the fairy tale aspect of this poem. Thank you for the explanation of this Triquatrain. I went back to read it again specifically to learn how you accomplished this. Your choice of rhyming words within the third lines was exceptionally poetic. Making the second and last lines rhyme as well also showed great skill. I marvel that it doesn't seem contrived in any way, but flows easily. I think I would have difficulty putting one of these stanzas together to meet the requirements. The fact that you produced six and generated a fairy tale while doing it is very impressive. Marge
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for these wonderful compliments. I'm so happy you like it that much. I know you could do one, too. It's a fun form to try. We do a lot of new things in Potlatch. Come join us.
Comment from Janet Foor
A Magical Meeting was a joy to read aloud.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme with a smooth cadence.
A sweet and tender story.
Beautiful artwork and presentation.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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A Magical Meeting was a joy to read aloud.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme with a smooth cadence.
A sweet and tender story.
Beautiful artwork and presentation.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate your lovely comments. So happy you liked it.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an interesting an well written poem. I like the flow and the way you describe everything. This sounds like an encounter of someone not of this world. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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This is an interesting an well written poem. I like the flow and the way you describe everything. This sounds like an encounter of someone not of this world. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I'm so glad, Jeffrey. Thank you.
Comment from rjuselius
I love mythical elements dear damommy and your poem is no exception! I think you have made a magical moment through your work and I can only say, bravo!
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I love mythical elements dear damommy and your poem is no exception! I think you have made a magical moment through your work and I can only say, bravo!
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Beck Fenton
What a delightful poem! I love the rhythm and the work it must have taken to accomplish this triquatrain to make it flow as if effortlessly. You've written a lovely story and I enjoyed the thoughts of seeing the fairy folk with you.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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What a delightful poem! I love the rhythm and the work it must have taken to accomplish this triquatrain to make it flow as if effortlessly. You've written a lovely story and I enjoyed the thoughts of seeing the fairy folk with you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you could see them, too.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is gorgeous, Yvonne! The meter is so beautiful and a true gift this reader. Wonderful visuals, great rhyme and flow, this is a second Triquatrain I read today. An absolutely beautiful and incredible composition, dear friend.
Impressed,
Y.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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This is gorgeous, Yvonne! The meter is so beautiful and a true gift this reader. Wonderful visuals, great rhyme and flow, this is a second Triquatrain I read today. An absolutely beautiful and incredible composition, dear friend.
Impressed,
Y.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Wow! I appreciate this fantastic review.
Comment from Artasylum
Beautifully penned. I want to find this flutist in this lush dreamy field. Fast read Love your subject... I was right there with you. Thanks so much. Looking forward yours, diana
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Beautifully penned. I want to find this flutist in this lush dreamy field. Fast read Love your subject... I was right there with you. Thanks so much. Looking forward yours, diana
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I'm happy you could be there, too. Lovely compliment.