Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a dedication to the birth of spring the jewel of seasons with blooming flowers, essence, green Nature, grass mixes with white snow, fertile soil and blue sky; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Your words thawed me out, love your rhyme scheme, makes me smile. I was on that mountain top with me to join you and watch the spring announce itself.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Dear Artasylum, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

To look down from a mountaintop & see this happening would be great Dove. I enjoyed your poem about the birth of Spring. Good job on the rhymes, the smooth flow, & the great examples of the coming of spring. The picture is a nice accompaniment, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Dear Jan, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there, Dove;
Such a pretty presentation to herald spring. Your poetry works on so many levels; you mentioned the things that happen in the spring, and you added a special touch about being able to observe the scene from an elevation.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove