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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Harry Smith
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Bill where do you find the outstanding pictures that compliment your work and gives it the energy needed. The imagery is outstanding in this short poem. Good Job.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    I go to Google and type in shrew pix.
reply by Harry Smith on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the info.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Terrific limerick and the photo is awesome. I never saw a shrew close up. I guess he uses his nose to dig with. I wonder if youtube has video of a shrew in action. I have to look. Hope so. :)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    I think the nose finds the worms it likes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how ignorantly we think of something as we wish to think for satisfaction and change our attitude and environment; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, ALD
Comment from c_lucas
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Man will always battle the rodents of life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Charlie.
reply by c_lucas on 17-Mar-2018
    You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from jaded831
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Lol fun. Your limerick made me laugh before my morning coffee, which is a hard thing to do. The picture works well with your poem, both made me laugh. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Jaded, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL!!! You always manage to find the fun in these poems, that's why I enjoy them so much. This one is so funny, and the picture is wonderful. Well done again, Bill! :) Sandra xx

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Sandra. I'm done with shrew and need something new.
Comment from judiverse
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Very clever. Great pun at the end. Excellent rhyme and flow for the limerick format. Great details about the shrew's eating and not quitting. Seeing the whole world as a stew is funny. That's a frightening looking little beast in the picture. You must be really shrewd to think of so many things to write about shrews. judi


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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Judi. Have to go on to something else now. Any ideas?
reply by judiverse on 17-Mar-2018
    You're welcome. You could write about a shrewd shrew. Maybe a financial genius. judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    I'm shrew with through. Need anudder nanimal.