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~ The Tooth Fairy ~

Rhyming Poem (HM)

28 total reviews 
Comment from For better for verse
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All poetry should rhyme in my opinion, I am not a fan of free verse. This was a fine example of rhyming poetry which I really enjoyed reading.
Its recognised as well it should be.....great job well done.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you For Better For Verse for taking the time to review my short Tooth Fairy poem. Your comments are encouraging and very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, cute poem and hilarious ending, ya what are you doing there Dad? Where is the tooth fairy.

Great metre and rhyme making this a perfect entry into the contest. Best wishes to you. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you Gloria for taking the time to review my short Tooth Fairy poem. Your comments are always encouraging and very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from lyenochka
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LOL! This is just so cute! Of course, Dad IS the tooth fairy but how could the little girl know? Love how you built the anticipation and how she waited with a flashlight. Really well done!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Lyenochka, thank you for taking the time to review my Tooth Fairy poem. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from ameen786
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A delightful write with lovely verses that should resonate with many readers; some kids are too smart for their parents to be fooled; thanks for sharing and good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much for popping in to review my Tooth Fairy poem. Your comments Ameen were very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Rubylou
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Hi DD,
I love this poem, Dad tries so hard to give his little girl the thrill of childhood but gets caught in the act.
Great rhyming and story line. Nice flow of words.
Just like getting caught trying to be Santa Claus. LOL
Rubylou

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    I am a bit late here but - Thank you Rubylou for popping in to review my Tooth Fairy poem. As always your comments are much appreciated. ~DD
reply by Rubylou on 27-Mar-2018
    You are most welcome.
    Rubulou
Comment from doggymad
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As this was sweet but always very sad. It also reminded me of when my tooth fell out during the night and the fairy didn't come. I spent hours cleaning the fang the day after to ensure that she would visit

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Freda, this is a late response but thank you for popping in to review my short poem. As always, I am very grateful. I still have some of my baby teeth in a draw somewhere. My parents did not introduce me to the tooth Fairy :-( but my youngest daughter was beautiful with it. She wrote such loving letter to say thank you. :-) ~DD
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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You can't fake out the child like that. You need to make sure that she's asleep first.. This is very cute and was fun to read. I enjoyed this. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Jeffrey, this is a late response but thank you for popping in to review my short Tooth Fairy poem. I am very grateful. ~DD
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written rhyming poem. The tooth fairy never comes while we are awake. Even Dad gets worried about the fairy that seems not to show her face yet to pick up the tooth.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Sandra, this is a late response but thank you for popping in to review my short poem. As always, I am very grateful. ~DD
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello PoemsOfDD
Your rhyming abab poem is so precious I had so much fun reading it, and how it brought back the cute memories of our three children and how they
Belived in the tooth fairy
Thank you for sharing.
Gert

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Gert, this is a late response but thank you so much for popping in to review my short Tooth Fairy poem. As always, I am very grateful. I still have some of my baby teeth in a draw somewhere and have kept my children?s baby teeth. Their beautiful notes of thanks to the Fairy are very precious and their teeth seemed too personal to just flush down the toilet or throw in the bin. I?ll leave it up to them when they are older. ~DD
reply by Gert sherwood on 27-Mar-2018
    You are welcome PoemsOfDD
    Smiles same with me I gave our three now grown children now have their baby teeth and wonder if they kept them?
    Gert
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Oh yes the good old days when the Tooth Fairy would visit. And yes it was either mom or dad. Very cute poem about a great childhood believe. I wonder how the Tooth Fairy every got started. Good Job. Roxanna

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
    Roxanna, this is a late response but thank you for popping in to review my short poem. I am very grateful. ~DD