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Comment from judiverse
I'll have the Earl Grey and Brie. Hold the shrew. This is written in such colorful, playful style. I don't know how you'd get a shrew to go willingly into a jar, but these guys don't sound like the brightest bulbs with their idea. Bet the shrew could outsmart them. Fun piece. judi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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I'll have the Earl Grey and Brie. Hold the shrew. This is written in such colorful, playful style. I don't know how you'd get a shrew to go willingly into a jar, but these guys don't sound like the brightest bulbs with their idea. Bet the shrew could outsmart them. Fun piece. judi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Shrew R shrewd. Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look.
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You're very welcome. Love the energy you put into these. judi
Comment from Kerry Foley
lol, This is a fantastic poem you've penned, Bill. You sure do a great job with the little critters. It's quite humorous, "perhaps we could have a tea" lol I love this line.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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lol, This is a fantastic poem you've penned, Bill. You sure do a great job with the little critters. It's quite humorous, "perhaps we could have a tea" lol I love this line.
~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Kerry
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Welcome:) Sorry for the late reply, I've been moving.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how to trap a shrew, a plan is suggested, make a trap and use a jar to do and with this Shrew World Three ends; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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This speaks how to trap a shrew, a plan is suggested, make a trap and use a jar to do and with this Shrew World Three ends; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! I love this one! I love how you change the spellings to fit the rhyme, why can't we all do that? It'll make writing much better fun! Well done, It was a hilariously funny poem. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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LOL! I love this one! I love how you change the spellings to fit the rhyme, why can't we all do that? It'll make writing much better fun! Well done, It was a hilariously funny poem. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Gus I gut it dat way, Sandra.
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL, Bill;
Thank you so much for giving me a good laugh this morning. I love the narrator interruptions within the lines of the poem. I think I will leave shrew hunting to those who have a stronger stomach.
Well done,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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LOL, Bill;
Thank you so much for giving me a good laugh this morning. I love the narrator interruptions within the lines of the poem. I think I will leave shrew hunting to those who have a stronger stomach.
Well done,
~patty~
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Patty