Nothing Lasts
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the gravity of words of the man to woman to do the best for her and the children, even at the time of death; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This speaks the gravity of words of the man to woman to do the best for her and the children, even at the time of death; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading my work, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is my first limerick to review. I think that it is so clever of you. You could easily win the competition. I don't know if I would use that photo. It sort of gives away your surprise ending. I think that I would use a photo of a woman surrounded by children. Your photo does add to the terror element though. Your choice of course. Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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This is my first limerick to review. I think that it is so clever of you. You could easily win the competition. I don't know if I would use that photo. It sort of gives away your surprise ending. I think that I would use a photo of a woman surrounded by children. Your photo does add to the terror element though. Your choice of course. Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a nice review. I had a hard time deciding about the picture, my daughter thought the same as you. I just couldn't find one I liked as well, so I went with it. I appreciate your comments.