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Comment from lyenochka
Fun children's poem with delightful sounds including the names and the repeated alliteration (marine mammal, victimless villains). You have some unusually spelled names like: Abbey and Lucile. I normally see them as Abby and Lucille.
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Fun children's poem with delightful sounds including the names and the repeated alliteration (marine mammal, victimless villains). You have some unusually spelled names like: Abbey and Lucile. I normally see them as Abby and Lucille.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka, for giving this a look. Abby is the preferred spelling I guess. Lucille is spelled both ways according to Google.
I figure 'unusually spelled names' goes along with fantasy.