Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Whales are awesome creatures. Their size makes them scary, and they seem to be rulers. If they enjoy Spring, that's a sign of their good taste. Interesting to call them to camels. Helliumated is a great word. The ending usually usually means filled with something or other. Very amusing. judi

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 25-Feb-2018

You are quite welcome. judi

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I really liked your poem where you make great use of playing with words. You do it very well. I like to play with words as well, but would never get away with it in writing as English is not my first language. Everybody would assume I'd made a mistake. I enjoyed your poem very much. All the best. Ulla:))

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 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018

I used to teach English and people still question me. I left notes today, but typically figure people know I'm goofing. Some don't.