Free Verse Collection 2
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem. Most dreams do not make sense at all when we try to recall it the following day. Some dreams we cannot remember. The important dreams are the ones we can remember well.
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A very well-written free verse poem. Most dreams do not make sense at all when we try to recall it the following day. Some dreams we cannot remember. The important dreams are the ones we can remember well.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from Mustang Patty
Oh, my.
Such a moving and lascivious piece of a story. Your visions in the night cause a great uproar in my soul. Could your dreams tell of the end?
I loved that you included the girl. She was part of the dream, and she was bound to be there. In spite of the polar bears, and in spite of the impending doom.
Well done,
~patty~
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Oh, my.
Such a moving and lascivious piece of a story. Your visions in the night cause a great uproar in my soul. Could your dreams tell of the end?
I loved that you included the girl. She was part of the dream, and she was bound to be there. In spite of the polar bears, and in spite of the impending doom.
Well done,
~patty~
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2018