Worlds
Viewing comments for Chapter 144 "Cockroach World 10"Animal poetry and short stories
12 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Bill! Can your writes get any funnier? I so enjoyed the dialogue and you took the sting out of this one slightly, as a giant cockroach would be a terrifying sight! A great witty write, very enjoyable, but please don't tell the cockroaches this story! He he he, love ya! Dolly x x x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
  |
This is hilarious Bill! Can your writes get any funnier? I so enjoyed the dialogue and you took the sting out of this one slightly, as a giant cockroach would be a terrifying sight! A great witty write, very enjoyable, but please don't tell the cockroaches this story! He he he, love ya! Dolly x x x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
-
Thanks, Dolly. Check out #9.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent entry in the Valentine's Day contest. It's sure to win. You write with such skill about love that transcends time and universes. What? Cockroaches? Never mind. your love poem sucks.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
|
This is an excellent entry in the Valentine's Day contest. It's sure to win. You write with such skill about love that transcends time and universes. What? Cockroaches? Never mind. your love poem sucks.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
-
Uh, thanks?