Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

What creepy looking small bugs to incite terror. They're not even poisonous like some snakes of spiders. Good picture to give an idea on how big they get. I scream whenever I see one.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

That's what they live for.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and well written poem about the cockroaches. You used very good words and very good imagery. Still don't like them! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 13-Feb-2018

you are so welcome!

Comment from pbomar1115

Exceptional

I got to say, Bill. Do any of the reviewers see some of your work just a little eccentric? I really don't think anyone's subject is as offbeat as yours. I do not mean to offend. I'm just saying, my friend. You truly have a gift for the unconventional.

Phillip

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

I try to please myself with odd things, Phillip. I'm not too good at spiritual, romance, or serious themes. I do those, but nowhere as good as others here. My niche will likely be the offbeat.

reply by pbomar1115 on 13-Feb-2018

I have those same feelings, Bill. I'm not as productive at turning out lots of stories. Especially, since I've learned and understood more. Putting what I know into practice is the problem for me.

Phillip

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Okay, are you sure Dolly would appreciate this one? Lol.
I'm guessing you are forcing a rhyme with "Canary Islants" and so the misspelling is intentional? A single roach isn't bad - it's just when they come with all their relatives that it's very unwelcome.

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Dolly asked for this one about these particular roaches. Yes I played with Islants, I should probably let people know. Yeh, roaches seldom go anywhere without a few thousand friends.

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

HaHaHa!... That sure does put a different light
on the subject!... I don't believe I'll be travelling to any
of those places any time soon (if at all)!...
Great poem, didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments!

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thanks, Wetbelly.

reply by Wetbelly01 on 13-Feb-2018

You're welcome...
Thanks for sharing!