Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

This is a fun children's poem for the contest. Nice pocture accompanied by a fun rhyming story about Roberts special day which is his birthday. I don't have any suggestions for improvement as I think it's fine as is. I wish you all the best in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written and very cute children's poem you have penned for a child on their special day! You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you, I appreciate your comments.

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

This is a wonderful children's poem--I loved the verse about the horn best, though I can't imagine leading a marching band for a living! The rhythm is wonderful and made me read the poem three times. Great job.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

---

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.