Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

This story is fun and fascinating. I'm enjoying it very much and will be ordering your book so I can share it with the readers in my family.

- "Although I could see (jake) was trying..." - Jake with a capital J.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Aw, thank you, Joy. I'm really pleased you are enjoying it. I hope your family will, too. I was a bit nervous writing this book after the success of the first book in the series. You never know if it will be received as well, but it certainly seems to be. Thank you for the heads up, my friend. Oh, and thanks for telling me about the J I'll go and sort that out now. Big hugs, :) Sandra x

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Great chapter. That John needs a scare or two. Well written, engaging and a storyline that continues to improve compelling the reader to want more.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, JoAnn, for another really lovely review, you are always so kind, my friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxxx

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This has a fantasy in reality, characters are realistic, plot spreads slow but steady, morality upheld; dialogues are appropriate; climax resolved, a curious ending, well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for another of your lovely reviews, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Sandra, first...I would subject Jake get to the nearest dentist...sounds personal...EEEKKKK...LOL...and of course there's always the old lamp falling over...starting a fire...right when the conversation is heating up...hmmmmm...now lets see if Sir Creepy is so tough against his sister...this is an awesome chapter sweet angel...don't stop writing on a count of me...stay up a couple days...I can take it...LOL...your story is very well written sweet girl...now...Next...love you soooooo much...Linda xxoo

you are all in my prayers...Hi to Ian...love xxoo

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

LOL!! :))) What are you??? Stay up for a couple of days, LOL, I'm choking on my cornflakes! You really are mad, Linda, just like me! LOL. Thank you so much for starting my day with a giggle, my dear friend and for the lovely 6 stars. Love you lots, too! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx

reply by l.raven on 05-Feb-2018

you are a sweet heart....I am just MAD...LOL...some times I feel like I have stayed up a couple days....LOL...you are always more than welcome to the smiles...I love reading your stories...they make me smile...now have a wonderful evening my sweet friend...and know I love you lots...bigger hugs back to ya...Hi to Ian...xxoo Linda

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Oh, I enjoyed reading this post, despite its length. I like the wit and clever moves of Veronica which made the story exciting and interesting. I look forward with eagerness in your next post. All the best.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your lovely, review, Susan. It is so encouraging to know you are enjoying my story, thank you! :) Sandra xx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

The powers that be aren't very smart. Veronica is much better at their job! LOL

So now she knows that Meg is nanny to Francis, if that will help her find him.

Uh, oh. FIRE! Joe is injured. How can he escape?

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by Phyllis Stewart on 04-Feb-2018

Oops! I owe you an apology. This chapter was superb. So much happened. I loved how Veronica pretended to be the ghost. This definitely deserved a six. But I hit the five on autopilot, and we cannot change fives to sixes. Not fair... why the heck not? Well, such things happen. I'll try to slow down and be more careful.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

I certainly hope they can get through to Sir John and get help for Francis. Clever of Veronica to pick up the cap and hand it to Joe. I'm sure he knows it didn't just fly over to Joe. Maybe he will believe Joe now. That is the breakthrough you need, I think. Well done. xxxx Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Nancy, and the wonderful review. Veronica certainly needs some help, it's not as easy as was in the first book! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Well, this is getting exciting!
I'm glad Veronica scared the stuffing out of the thugs and Sir John.

I'd say Gwendolyn comes across as a bit of a wuss, but the time she had lived in probably didn't encourage women to be bold.

Two possible corrections:

got mashed spuds fer brains. What say you, Jake?'

     Although I could see Tod (should this be Jake?) was trying to match his mate's show of bravado, 


     'What's going on?' The expression on Sir John's face would normally have scared the living daylights out (of) his flunkies, but their nervousness wasn't about him anymore,

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Well spotted Sue! I've made the correction, thank you so much for letting me know. Thank you also for the lovely 6 stars and lovely review. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Veronica came up with the right idea just in time. I just hope Joe doesn't wind up being burned to death. I liked hearing the conversation of the Powers That Be.


-It's not as if we can we can contact her.' Take one 'we can.'

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Aw, thank you, Yvonne, I'm really pleased you are still enjoying this one. It will start coming together soon, but there are lots of pieces of the puzzle to get in place to be able to do it just yet. Thanks for pointing out that double up error, you were the only one to spot it! Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by damommy on 04-Feb-2018

Everyone else was too polite to mention it. 8-)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You continually take us from such excitement to more in each following chapter. This is very well written and i can see it in my mind and follow the pattern

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018

Thank you, Barb. It does seem to work out that way, doesn't it? I really appreciate your comment about being able to see it in your mind, that is really encouraging, thank you!!! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx